life poem

India
January 27, 2008 8:34am CST
life in desert was sandy ,life in cave was lonely,life in ocean was salty,life in stars was resplendent n life in car was modern .As person have different life some have nice life that they whant for long time n many people dont wants there life because of many such problem may aries in there life that they hate n wants to loss there life . i think i m right some where isnt if any one agree with me plz make some comments on this.
1 response
@crazylife (855)
• United States
31 Jan 08
i agree with what you are saying i like your poem