My wishing star

@tommy408 (361)
Malaysia
April 22, 2007 11:50pm CST
Remember that day? The one when you told me about wishing stars? How one picks a star from the sky and make a wish. How then there will be huge chance that that wish will come true? I remember that day well. I remember being cocky and tried to tell you that sometimes what we see in the sky is not star at all. Just remaining lights from the stars long dead. I remember you frowning, and being the stubborn girl that you are, saying that you like your idea of the wishing star better than mine of the dead. Truth be told, I liked your idea better too. Of the wishing star. I picked a star the other night. The sky was gunmetal gray. Threatening rain perhaps. But there was a star. Only one. peeking through the dark sky. It was not as shiny or as big as I wanted it to be. But it will do. For I do not have many wishes. I remember having only one wish. Just one. That you will love me. I made a wish that night. Just that one wish. That you will love me like I do you p/s :- this is an attempt to write fiction only. It is not a true story. Critics are most welcomed.
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@joycer (498)
• Sri Lanka
5 May 07
You write so well, I can feel the emotions in the context of your sentences. Lucky girl, she is! I hope your wish will come true.
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@tommy408 (361)
• Malaysia
5 May 07
Hahaha!!! Thanks for the praises and the wish :) The lucky one, however is me. For getting to know and fall in love and most importantly be loved by her ;)
@tommy408 (361)
• Malaysia
5 May 07
OH, and by the way, the story was pure fiction. It never happened :). I am in love with a girl, that part only is fact
@joycer (498)
• Sri Lanka
5 May 07
Yeah i know, coz you can only write this beautiful when you are in love with somebody. If one day she reads this. You will truly impress her. You can give this to her as a present!