do you like poem?

poems i used to read - poems i used to read...
Philippines
May 19, 2007 8:25am CST
do you like reading poem, what poem do you like to read mostly? here's one of my favorite poem this poem has no title so i just made it: EMPTY SPACES inside my skin there is this space it twist and turn it bleeds and aches inside my heart there's an empty room it's waiting for lightning it's for you muscles are sinew velvet ant stone this vessel is haunted it creeks and moans my bones call to you in their seperates skin i make myself translucent to let you in.... what can you say about it?comments,suggestion? negative or positive comments are accepted..
2 responses
@al1979ex (125)
• Philippines
19 May 07
i think that poem stinks. i dont like it at all.
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@al1979ex (125)
• Philippines
19 May 07
just kidding!
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• Philippines
20 May 07
thanks i appreciate your comments, wahhhaaahaha just kidding. well anyways thanks again..
@luvreen (168)
• Philippines
26 May 07
I loved reading poems if i saw one and spent some time reading and trying to comprehend the content of it. when i read yours well its not bad at all. why don't you join poetry making contest hahaha LOLz!
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