A poem that I wrote, What do you think?
By cramey
@cramey (55)
United States
June 7, 2007 10:09pm CST
Is this how it's supposed to be?
To want to believe
But nothing to believe in
To want to be happy
But to make you happy
To smile
But inside you know it's nothing more than a lie
Is it wrong to want to die
When no one notices your alive
Crystal Rae Ramey
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@jlnoble (21)
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8 Jun 07
I liked your poem here is one of mine!!
The nights I sit and wonder
To natures beauty I take a small walk
Embracing myself in all the peace around
As I look to the night oh how the lake glistens in the moonlight
Natures third shift has now taken its course
The owl on the tree looking for food
The frogs hoping on the lilly pad
Hearing the chirping sounds as such beauty surrounds me
Peace and love as I see two horses playing in the night
Night so peaceful as I finally found me a tree
Falling asleep to the peace of nature in its comfort now I fully sleep!!