a song I made up, hope you guys like it

@galatea (686)
Philippines
June 14, 2007 4:59am CST
I got into a creative mood three days ago, well... an unusually creative mood because this time I came up with a song. Try to listen to it here: http://mavicity.imeem.com/music/9SScF44k/villain/ It's not a first, but this one I liked. What do you think of the lyrics? Villain it's hard to be the villain in love and watch the one you loved break down cause you can't make yourself and you can't make your mind go against your heart you try to say it with words then turn your back and close doors cause you can't make yourself and you can't make your mind go against your heart how you want them to move on but how you know that it will be long it will be long it's time for me to play the villain in love and watch the one i loved break down cause i can't make myself and i can't make my mind go against my heart and how i want to take your place to be the one who's breaking down leaking tears it's hard to be the villain in love It's a story of someone who was used to being hurt, playing the victim of love, the one left behind. This persona suddenly found herself on the other side, the side that causes the hurt, the one who leaves. And she realizes that it is also difficult to explain how she has fallen out of love and in the end she wants to swap places.
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3 responses
tyspeaks
@tyspeaks (25)
• United States
4 Jul 07
I thoroughly enjoyed listening to your song. You have a great voice. Just don't lose track of the fact that this is your work of art. I'm assuming that this an amateur work which means that it is even more impressive! Definately continue to write songs. I write song instead of journaling and what not, ya they aren't all great but it is easier for me to let my thoughts out in lyrical form. Good job!
jencai
@jencai (3412)
• Philippines
19 Jun 07
Great! I've heard the song today. Your voice match the song you've composed. It sound so sweet and deep. I'm sure you've made it out of your feelings. It's really nice to hear. Thank's for sharing them here!
galatea
@galatea (686)
• Philippines
19 Jun 07
Thanks for your encouraging comments. I do have another song but maybe later, it's a bit sadder. ;)
raijin
@raijin (10345)
• Philippines
20 Jun 07
The lines and the song was great, I wonder what made you do this!;) I also knew someone like that, that person seemed to be lonely all it's life. I pressume, never was happy and contented on what they get. I do feel sorry for that person, but I can't also wait to hear the other ssong that you're gonna compose!;)