well, here goes. My first poem on mylot lol
By ESKARENA1
@ESKARENA1 (18261)
July 9, 2007 1:43pm CST
And too old, she said as she turned to face the wall
bitter, cold memmories
a pain above them all
And too old, with laughter turn away
ultimate rejection
half-heard, no other way
and too old,
brings the curtain down,
coupled with a smirk, if not a frown
and too old
will you never understand
all im saying is will you old my and
Ok never going to be poet loriet, but its honest from the heart
Ressie inspired me to write today for the first time in years
bless you Ressie. You will never know how much it means but its the first time in 15 years i have written poetry. So however rusty i am right now, i will get better. Lets share our work here
blessed be
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3 responses
@eva_diva (287)
• Philippines
9 Jul 07
bravo, eskarena1. Im not a poet myself but seeing that you took the time and effort to publish your poem in mylot, i show my appreciation.im pretty sure that with constant practice and with the guidance of your emotions, you will find it worthwhile to share your experiences through poetry.
@ibsnet (1268)
• India
9 Jul 07
I encourage your writing on the first time. You can improve well if you go on trying. No poet has made his/her greatest poems in single day. Try and you will see you have the potential to do in this field also. Best wishes.
