beautiful

@sreevasu (2717)
India
July 13, 2007 12:04pm CST
The vast beautiful blue sky The great ocean of infinity The earth, sun and moon are the ducks swimmers in that ocean Millions of stars and galaxies the up and down foams in the waves In every full moon night I decorate a golden throne for her In the end, without seeing her the blue black clouds drop their tears in me
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@misheleen73 (6037)
• United States
14 Jul 07
very interesting Vasu. I don't know how to feel about this one. It almost invokes a sadness within me for some reason. A sadness of longing and wanting, never being reciprocated. I don't know. I just sense a sadness here. It's just my interpretation anyway !!
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
14 Jul 07
A little complex, I admit. It could be the tears felt the sadness... but I am fascinated with the sky Misheleen... I may be wrong
• United States
14 Jul 07
Nice and thoughtful. Emotion evoking too.
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
14 Jul 07
Thank you for appreciating my lines...