rearrange pls...english
By lonely_f16
@lonely_f16 (2146)
Philippines
July 22, 2007 4:43am CST
The Lurah Pak Kasim loves his son fiercely. But deep in his heart he doubts whether the young man loves him equally as well. The Lurah is always afraid that his son might find him too old fashioned and conservative. He sees how most of the young folk now think and act so differently.
-from the Teak House, Mochtar Lubis
pls rearrange...to make it coherent because I find it somewhat difficult
2 responses
@anousha (406)
• Mauritius
22 Jul 07
I think it should be arranged like this:
The Lurah Pak Kasim sees how most of the young folk now think and act so differently. He is always afraid that his son might find him too old fashioned and conservative. The lurah loves his son fiercely but deep in his heart he doubts whether the young man loves him equally as well.
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@jaywhiting (560)
• Australia
22 Jul 07
"equally as well" doesnt quite sound right to me, for whatever reason.
@lonely_f16 (2146)
• Philippines
22 Jul 07
thank you for replying and I'm so grateful to both of you and especially you...
@fake_you (391)
• Philippines
23 Jul 07
The Lurah Pak Kasim loves his son fiercely. But deep in his heart he doubts whether the young manloves him equally as well. He sees how most of the young folk now think and act so differently. The Lurah is always afraid that his son might find him too old fashioned and conservative.
