Reading a novel
By carpenter5
@carpenter5 (6782)
United States
August 6, 2007 7:01pm CST
If you are reading a novel, do you prefer that the entire story be told from one point of view? For instance, if it is a romance novel, do you like to know what both characters are thinking?I do. It helps me relate to both characters, but I spoke with another writer friend, who says it confuses her.
What do you think?
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19 responses
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I'd love to read it when you get to a point where you think you can share! I have a friend reading mine as I write, and she keeps saying MORE, MORE.
She and my daughter are reading faster than I can get edits done!
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
Did you know there was a photo upload maximum for the day? Hmm...I didn't know that. I tried to add this cute picture to my comment.
Anyway, I agree with you, IF the author has what it takes to make sure you know who's speaking. I have a novel in the works, and sometimes when I read back over what I've written, I haven't done that and have to do some editting.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
it takes a good author to tie everything together where you can stay focused on the story. I am not one that can jump around from one set of characters to another, but some writers make it easy to do that. It depends on the writing style.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
17 Sep 07
Me too. If an author can make me laugh, I'm in love with their writing forever! Even in something like a modern day romance novel, the characters have got to have strong personalities, or I'll never pick up another book by that author.
@gewcew23 (8007)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I like to know what both characters are thinking. If it doesn't have a view from both sides I start to add in my own thoughts and that could be bad, because then I get lost in my own thought and not what the writer is actually writing. I don't think that if I was a writer that it would confuse me. I think it makes for a better story line.
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
Well, you know how I write! I just can't tell what the other person is feeling until I get inside their heads. Wait until you see where I'm going with Kyle's Wish!
I'm e-mailing you Chapter 3 right now. I have chapter 4 about half finished.
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@ElicBxn (63594)
• United States
7 Aug 07
If the story is understandable, I'm fine with multi POVs. Especially if they give me a chapter break between them. Short stories I'm a bit pickier about, but I wrote one with a friend that was always from someone elses POV than my main people, just for the challage of it.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
That's an exciting a different idea. i read one some time ago that was written from their baby's perspective. That was funny. I think it would be neat for someone to write from the dog or cat's POV. My dog looks at me sometimes like she knows exactly what I'm thinking or saying.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
17 Sep 07
I was reading a Susan Elizabeth Phillips book the other night, which is my favorite author right now...and I started laughing, because she writes romance, but her characters are just hysterical. My dog looked at me like I'd lost my marbles.
@makingpots (11915)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I really don't prefer one over the other. I just like for it to be done very well. If you friend could find an author that wrote from many perspectives effectively she might not get confused. For me it is all in the ability of the writer.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I agree whole heartedly. I have seen some do it very well, and some not so well at all.
I read one a couple of months ago, and I wish I could remember the name of the story, or who wrote it, but I read so many, I get confused :)
The POV was from their 6 month old baby. It was hysterical~!
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@15felicity (79)
• Philippines
7 Aug 07
if i read a novel i put myself as the main character of the story, i cry, i laugh, angry, surprised, you know every emotion, that's why sometimes i'd rather prefer to read books than to watch movies.
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
Oh me too! Do you ever feel like that by 3-4 chapters in that you actually know the person? That's how I feel about this series that I'm reading now. I can't remember the name of them, but it's 12 books and they're all about the characters in this town. Each book is about a different family member or friend. And there is a murder mystery that is being solved throughout the series. I can't wait to get to the end. I'm on Book 2.
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@ElusiveButterfly (45940)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I think it also brings more depth to the character when you hear what both people are thinking. Romance novels are my favorite reads. My favorite author is Karen Robards.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I've not read anything by her. I like several authors. Nora Roberts is good. I read a book two weeks ago called Match me if you Can. It was by Susan Elizabeth Phillips. It was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I laughed at the characters so many times!
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@Shaun72 (15959)
• Palatka, Florida
7 Aug 07
I do that is one of the very reasons why if there is a movie and a book I like to read the book because watching a movie you don't know what the people are thinking or feeling like you do when you read a book.
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I often try and read the book before I see the movie, because it's kind of disappointing sometimes to see the movie, and then read the book and see all that they left out.
I have asked my dad to get me the Wizard of Oz for that very reason!
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
Windtalkers was another really good example of this. There was so much in the book, that wouldn't fit in the movie. Though both were good. If you love world war II history, that is a great read.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
7 Aug 07
I like multiple POVS. one pov per chapter. I do not know about your writer friend, but she is being very limited. If one is writing a short story, then one pov works, but if you write a novel, you might have it written in the first person and do not have the actions of the other characters going on. I like to know what the characters are thinking unless it is a mystery and a suspense and one of the characters is going to kill the other and you want it to be a surprise, but romance novels? It would make for a contrast when she is thinking he is the handsomest man in the world, and when he is thinking of that pest who is always asking for a raise.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I love that thought. My question to her was this if it's a romance...how am I supposed to know what he is thinking? I need to know what is going on in his head, if I'm going to know how she is feeling, and how they are both responding to a situation.
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@AmbiePam (92719)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I much prefer the story from two sides. But I don't like it when some authors show not just the two main characters side, but minor characters as well. I don't like that. But your question has been something I always wished I could talk to authors about. It makes the read much more enjoyable to see the story from two sides. It opens up the story to more facets than just it would be with just one side.
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
17 Sep 07
Oh shucks...lol
I hope that I can get it finished. I haven't had time to even look at it in over a month. I have new responsibilities at work, and I feel like I'm going under for the last time.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
That's what I'm trying to do with this novel that I'm working on now. I've been developing these characters for years, but I've never had the nerve to try and get them down on paper. With the new competition at gather, I thought ah...what they hey. who knows, i might be the next published author around here!
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
Oh me too! That is, if the author is clever enough to be able to go back and forth. Most that get published do have that ability. I like romances, but not smut. Some don't think there is a difference, but I've found several different series that are clean romance.
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@worldwise1 (14885)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I can be happy with it either way. I think that some novels should only be resd from the main character's perspective, while others do well when the perspective is shared. It only confuses me when it is told from many people's perspectives.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
If you get more than 2 characters (the main characters in my opinion) then it does get confusing. You have too many thoughts and points of view. I do like to get dialogue from those around, but it needs to be from the main characters voice.
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@raychill (6525)
• United States
8 Aug 07
I can't get into romance novels.
I'm not sure what I like most in books. I like to be able to envision the book in my head... like a movie. I like to know everything. Jodi Picoult writes books from different peoples perspectives and I can easily envision everything as if it were a movie. J.K Rowling on the other hand writes Harry Potter from no real point of view and I, too, can envision the whole thing very clearly.
So I don't know if I really have a favorite perspective as long as I can see it all in my head I'm Happy!
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
17 Sep 07
That's true for me as well. i have to have a story line that stays consistent, and characters with some personality. Wishy-washy people just won't keep my interest for very long. I also am hesitant about purchasing another book by that author.
@michaeldadona (5684)
• Malaysia
7 Aug 07
When reading novel, I don't like to have only a point of view. It must be more than one. Focusing on one point does not enjoy my reading that particular novel.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I agree Michael! When I talk to someone, I don't always know what they're thinking, so how would one get the character across to the reader if you didn't write at least some from their point of view? This is my biggest problem with it.
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@patgalca (18366)
• Orangeville, Ontario
7 Aug 07
I think I prefer just the one POV. I find multiple POV's confusing. I have read many different authors doing it and even if they start a new chapter and head it with a character's name telling me that it is a POV change, I am still confused. I would rather be inside the head of one character, and BE that character. As a writer I find it easier to write that way as well.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
As a writer, I find it harder to write, because I need to know what the other character is thinking. But, that is why we all have different writing styles. I find it harder to know what the other person is feeling, without getting inside their head. I think if you are writing in first person, it would be really hard to do though.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I have read some books that would have been down right boring if Only told from one point of view! Especially when the characters do something bold or funny. You get their point of view while they're doing the action and then someone else's when the deed is done!
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@mykmari_08 (2464)
• Philippines
7 Aug 07
I am a writer of romance stories by heart. And I say so myself. And being a writer, I find it a lot harder to write with the goal of giving two or more sides of the story, rather than relating it from a lone point of view. However, if I were to be the reader, I also prefer knowing more than one point of view - from that of the hero and the villain. I believe that writers who do this have much more experience and depth and are more able to give life to the romance or suspense story.
@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I am writing a novel now, and I am in the head of both the man and the woman. It's kind of neat to put myself in there and try to figure out what they might be thinking at the same time about the same situation. Sometimes, I just write what I want my husband to think if we were in that position.
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@wiccania (3360)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I love it when a story comes from different perspectives. Not all writers are capable of doing it well, though. I read mostly mystery/thrillers and suspense/thrillers or horror novels. So if I can get the hero and the villain's perspectives it's really a cool overall effect to the story.
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
7 Aug 07
I read a Linda Howard book that did that. "Mr. Perfect" goes back and forth between the crazed murderer and the heroine and police detective who are trying to find who's doing the killings. It is one of my favorite LH books.
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@rainyday8119 (2)
• India
10 Aug 07
I am dyeing to read that kind of book. Once i read a short story in that way it was very funny. Especially if it is a romantic novel the understanding of a single situation by both the male & female counter parts of the story is so different that you end up having a great laugh. can you recommend some?
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@carpenter5 (6782)
• United States
17 Sep 07
Susan Elizabeth Phillips is good. Her stories are great and her characters have well...character! I especially like her "Chicago Stars" series. You can read them out of order, but they make more sense if you start at the beginning.
I also like Linda Howard, who writes murder mysteries with a twist.