Would you tell me...?
By sreevasu
@sreevasu (2717)
India
August 10, 2007 1:10pm CST
I never had been a poet before we met
It is you, you just taught me how to write
I was not a dreamer of anything that is sweet
You are the one who entered my dreams first.
I was hungry and you fed me what I want
I was thirsty till you showed me an ocean to end my haunt
You touched me, beatfied me and shaped me
Made me bloom, made me complete in me
Would you let me in your dreams
Would you know me as I know you?
Would you love me as I love you?
Would you tell me you love me?
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
2 Apr 08
Great, profound thoughts here, Sreeasu. Loved it. Do not know how I missed it!!
How are you doing? I keep missing you.
Take care friend.
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@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
7 Apr 08
Oh how we missed it!! Pls take care and continue to write, pls do not stop writing, you are such a talent!!
Where did you go, to Lake market, Dalhousie...did you relive those old memories!!
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
8 Apr 08
Well.. I will take care of next time
I wandered around kalighat.. opted metro rail to esplanade and from there walked to Delhousie... went to my old office behind writers bldg...
It was sad.... and I felt Kolkatta changed only very little in 25 yrs...
the most noticeable new things are boards/hoardings of mobile companies..
Next time (hopefully, not too far) I will catch you for sure.
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@vivian870618 (18)
• China
19 Mar 08
the poesy is very beautiful,it nearly make me cry.
and your profile is very good,it's chinese