Poetry writing
@mystic2magick (5)
United States
August 22, 2007 12:56pm CST
Who enjoys and gets their feelings out by writing poems in any form?
Here is one I have written, please do not be afraid to give me feedback on what you think. Thanks!
Secrets Deep
Within me lyes myself true
Deep inside I always knew
My true self that who is me
Pure power in me this I believe
Secrets I do hide deep inside
One day no longer I have to hide
Some day, one day, I will share who I am
In this time, this day no room to understand
So for now my secrets deep inside
SO for now this is where my secrets SHALL LYE!!
-By J.G.
1 person likes this
5 responses
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
23 Aug 07
I have so many mixed emotions
I have been struck with a love potion
I dont know why I feel this way
I wish it would just go away
Its holding me down
I just want to drown
I ask god everyday
To change my thinking and my way
I look into your eyes
But only to relize
You dont want to be with me
A friend is all you see
I still have hope
But for now I got to coupe
I want to be friends
but forever tell the end
for a little walk
or maybe even a talk
When you feel alone
Just call on the phone
I want to be here for you
As I step out of the blue
Will you be here for me
As a good friend in need
Best friends
thats all I want to be
@mystic2magick (5)
• United States
24 Aug 07
lena2000, I enjoyed reading your poem, it was really good.
1 person likes this
@sandeep_2991984 (675)
• India
23 Aug 07
Welcome my friend to mylotters.
i love reading poems.i think you are good poet. carry on friend.
@Nardz13 (5055)
• New Zealand
26 Aug 07
Hi there. I enjoy writing a little bit of poetry, well i try to make it sound as good as I think it does lol...
