a poet i loved,if you like it,please support me.
By chenxihui
@chenxihui (53)
China
September 5, 2007 8:35am CST
when you love someone
(by preppie)
when you love someone so deep inside,
it seems like it's so easy to hide.
you've loved him for so very long,
you would think he could do no wrong.
every day you would hope and pray,
that he woukd always stay this way.
he treated you like you should be treated,
you thought your life was finally completed.
you thought your love was growing true,
and then one day it was all so blue.
he started putting you down and it hurt,
you thought all you were to him was dirt.
he started ignoring you and you wondered why,
all you wanted to do was vurl up and die.
you thought your relationshiop would never end,
but that was all so fake and pretend.
one night he was so sweet to you,
you thougt all those things were maybe untrue,
two days later he was back the same,
you thought yo were the one to blame.
you thought the relationship was getting too serious
and that you had become a little too curious.
by this time yo knew it wouldn't last,
all the nice things he said were in the past.
you thought that yo would marry him some day
but this time god wanted to get his way.
you wanted things back how they were before,
but you knew this couldn't happen anymore.
it was a saturday night about ten o'clock,
you heard the news and it wasn't a shock.you knew this was going to happen soon,
as you laid there and cried in the pale lt moon.
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@trinihd (996)
• United States
5 Sep 07
Nice easy rhymes...needs a little work, could be perfect! Who is preppie? He/she should post his/her work on writing dot com to get helpful reviews on how to improve and encouragement to write more.
@chenxihui (53)
• China
6 Sep 07
i don't know who is preppie,i just read his poet in my magazines.and i find it attract me,so i think may be others will like it.so i copy it and share with you.
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