This is the right way to express ur feeling? i am wating for responses
By johnwat
@johnwat (382)
India
October 5, 2007 1:06pm CST
Once upon a tieme a bird fall in love ..... with a white rose......... one day bird proposed to rose but rose refused........bird daily came and propose rose,.......then.... white rose said if i turn in to 'red' i will love u after a day. bird came n cut her wings spread her blood on the rose n rose turned red the rose realized how much bird love me, but it was too late ........burd waz dead..................... u so respect the love n feeling of the person who loves u ...........?
1 person likes this
3 responses
@tuhpaul (475)
• India
5 Oct 07
True love means to sacrifice-but not with ones life-you penned it wonderfully-it does have an inner meaning-one should be cautious in wanting a proof for true love-or may lose love for ever.
@puranijeans (247)
• India
5 Oct 07
hey
i think that love and sacrifice should be kept apart
i respect all other feelings when they say i can die for him/her
but then what
what's the end????
i never want to die for the person i love
i can do anything except dying, i donot know what's the life after this, whether we will meet or not, so i want to spend all the rest days of my life with that person i love...............
@carol_m (709)
• Philippines
8 Oct 07
A very tragic story..isn't it ironic that we realize the worth of someone when he/she is already gone but just take him/her for granted when he's around?
On my part, I guess I couldn't be like a bird which sacrifices its life to prove its love for the rose..nah, I couldn't make that sacrifice, and it isn't the right way of showing your love. I might ask for the impossible but I would be disgusted if a guy who would give his life just to please me. In the same manner that I detest a guy who wouldn't even make an effort to give what I want.
@ragini155 (56)
• India
6 Oct 07
well its a touching story. but suc love is hard to find these days. It takes lot to so such an act. these are different souls altogether. But in reality this shouldnt be the case. Showing your love has other ways. one must try and be with the love. In process of proving something, one must not lose self. Whats the benefit of the proof. Win and make yourself a winner. But i liked the story. Thanks.
