A Poem I need opinions on PLEASE
By jennwhite07
@jennwhite07 (130)
United States
October 19, 2007 8:24am CST
So I have written a short poem and I am going to share it with you. Please take a minute and let me know your HONEST opinion!When you lose someone special
It's difficult to carry on
You don't know how to take it
Knowing that their gone
Keep your eyes to heaven
God will see you through
He needed another angel
God will comfort you
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4 responses
@Lifez2short (4962)
• United States
19 Oct 07
That is a very pretty little poem. I would like to share one that I wrote for my father when he passed if that is OK with you?
@jennwhite07 (130)
• United States
19 Oct 07
Thank you and yes please share your poems with me I love to read them.
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@Lifez2short (4962)
• United States
19 Oct 07
I'm sorry I got sidetracked I will share it with you as soon as I have a free minute.
@gapeach65 (805)
• United States
19 Oct 07
First, I'd like to say that I'm so sorry for your loss. When did your father pass away?
I lost my dad 19 years ago, he was 52, and most recently my mom in February, she was 77. I know the pain and loss that you must be feeling right now. All I can say is that it will get easier, it just takes time, trust that God will help you though it. I love that your dad is your guardian angel now. I feel the same way about my mom.
I think your poem is wonderful. Simple, to the point and from the heart, it's beautiful.
@jennwhite07 (130)
• United States
19 Oct 07
Hi Peach. I am sorry your for loss as well. I just lost my daddy on June 8th 2007. He was diagnosed with Metastatic NonSmall Cell Carcinoma in March. So we had little time to prepare. Thank you so much for the compliment
@spoiled311 (5500)
• Philippines
19 Oct 07
oh...it's so touching. is that for your dad? what happened? i am sorry...God bless you!
@jennwhite07 (130)
• United States
19 Oct 07
Hi yes I wrote that and several others about my daddy. I was the poster girl for "daddies little girl" Thank you for your kind words. God Bless you and your family as well
@brandy78 (159)
• Canada
25 Oct 07
I liked your poem I think it really helps to get something down on paper I wrote one for my friends husband who was killed in an accident a couple of weeks ago.. I just felt like I needed to do something .. good job on the poem..my condolences on the loss of your father.. My prayers are with you take care
