I wrote a poem today
By Leca
@lecanis (16647)
Murfreesboro, Tennessee
October 22, 2007 5:25pm CST
I wrote a poem today, and I don't know if I should celebrate or mourn. I rarely write when I am happy. When I am happy, when I am living my life, writing is not something that comes naturally to me. I once had a friend who challenged me to write happy poems, and it took weeks to come up with each one for him. But when I am sad, the poetry drips from my fingertips as if it were nothing.
Are there any other writers here that feel this way? That only write when they are sad, or something is wrong? That although they get many compliments on their writing, and are told that it is beautiful, feel as if they might be better off if they lived more and wrote less?
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
24 Oct 07
You know, I think you're the first person who actually asked if I was going to share the poem! *laughs*
Duality/Pain
This pain in my chest
is real, is physical
created by an illness
But this pain in my chest
is also more than that
created by your coldness
My lungs might be burning me
with the agony of drowning
but it is you who kills me.
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@Pose123 (21635)
• Canada
24 Oct 07
Hi lecanis, I know what you mean, I too have to be in a certain mood to write. Usually it's serious or contemplative, but I've also written some lighter stuff. Sometimes I'll go for months without writing, and then a thought will come to me, and I almost feel compelled to write. Blessings.
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
25 Oct 07
I went over a year this time I think, before I felt compelled to write! It's weird, eh?
I used to write lighter stuff more often when I spent a lot of time on a forum where there were a couple other people who always posted poetry, and I would write things straight onto the forum just for fun. I kind of miss that, but I haven't found that it really seems to work in mylot, and I have yet to find another forum where I find at home like that.
@lucky_witch (2707)
• Philippines
23 Oct 07
Wow taht would be great. I also sometimes write a poem. I do it more easily when I am in the mood to do that. There are times when I feel that I am in the mood, and words just strikingly coming in and out of my mind. NO limits! BUt there are times that even I want to write agood poem, seems that nothing good came into me.
@frecklelip334 (1668)
• United States
24 Oct 07
i have to either be so in love, or so depressed!! or it's easier to write poems about my son...and they're always happy! but it's hard for me to just sit down and write a poem about how the sun shined so brightly this morning....it's easier to write about how cloudy it is, and how i feel the rage of the storm clouds...haha!!
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@blog8withJ (136)
• United States
23 Oct 07
Poetry or poem is a way or channel to express ourselves towards the push and pull of life. It is the means of expressing your inner feelings towards the situation.
I wrote a lot of poem when I feel sad, lonely, happy, spiritual, inspired, in love and everything in my life. It's cool.
Good thing to know that you wrote a poem. That's cool.
@twilight_75 (479)
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23 Oct 07
What a coincidence this topic coming up. I had to go to my mothers yesterday as she wanted me to clean her computer up, as she had sold it. This computer used to be mine. I was hoping that i'd left my poetry on it because i'd lost the book i'd handwritten it all in. It was still there, i was so pleased. I read some of it and couldn't believe i'd ever been in that place to have writen such sad and heart felt poems. I try to write every now and then, but like you it takes ages. I seem also to have my creative streak flowing during my bleak moments. I think my emotions have to very strong to be able to write fluildly
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@bronie123 (4587)
• United States
23 Oct 07
I am not a very good writer at all im mean its bad really but i find when im sad,down, or just have a lot on my mind i feel like writing it even if no one reads it ever i feel some sort of relief and a slight peace with myself and Its good to get out how i feel about something
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@BayleighGray (4334)
• United States
23 Oct 07
Hi Bronie,
I think its good to just let it out on paper. Its almost like telling someone, and it sure does make me feel better. Even if its just a jungle of thoughts that may not make sense to anyone else but me. Heck, sometimes Ive reflected back on things and it dont make sense to me.LOL
Your probably a better writer than you think you are! ; )
Bay xx
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@bronie123 (4587)
• United States
23 Oct 07
not to long ago i was very depressed i wrote a 6 page letter type thing about mine and my fiance's relationship
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
24 Oct 07
I write a lot about relationships too... sometimes letters to the person involved, sometimes poems, or even stories about the way I wish things could have gone or where I think they are going.
I think just about everyone judges their own writing too harshly, as well. I know I tend to do so.
@patgalca (18355)
• Orangeville, Ontario
22 Oct 07
I think the term I would use is emotional. That is when I write poetry. It can be happy emotions or sad emotions or angry emotions. I don't usually write about the scenery but I might use the scenery as a metaphor. I recently sat outside my daughter's school while I waited to pick her up from basketball practice. The night before she had been whining about having to write a love poem. How can a 14 year old who has never experienced love write a love poem? Anyway, as I sat outside her school I looked at the building and started to jot down a love poem using the building as a metaphor. It actually turned out pretty cool.
Sometimes in writing group I get writing prompts that I don't know what to do with and find myself writing a poem. In one case I was given a list of words to use. It was Halloween themed so I wrote a scary little poem using every word that was in the list. I did it in 10 minutes and it all rhymed.
I don't thing I'm very poetic because I am not very good at description. THis is probably why I usually write from my emotions.
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
23 Oct 07
I like what you said about using the scenery as a metaphor. Considering where I live, I have a lot of poems involving snow, or water (I'm right near Lake Superior).
I suppose mine is emotional too, but I have a harder time writing about happiness. I'm not sure why, but it might just be because I started writing poetry at a time when I didn't know what happiness was.
Oh, I like the idea of being given a list of words to use! That's really neat! I wish I were in a writing group!
I hardly ever rhyme my poetry, but I'm told it's good. I've had a few poems published, and quite a few others that have won contests and such, especially when I was younger. It still mystifies me because it's usually stuff that just kind of flows out of me, not things I work on consciously so much.
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@arkaf61 (10881)
• Canada
23 Oct 07
ALthough the impulse to write comes often when life is bringing us some difficulties and thus many people right more about sad events, sad feelings, there are others that love to write when they feel happy.
In my case anything serves as an excuse to write LOL if I"m sad, happy, bored, excited:)
Personally I don't feel that the time I spend writing is wasted, I find I live enough, that I enjoy my life as much as I can and still have time to write regardless of the reason why. But I also know quite a few people that are like you, which is quite normal anyway.
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@contuletz2007 (734)
• Romania
23 Oct 07
I used to write a lot a few years ago when my life was a total wreck. I had no friends, my family wanted me to be a super-child and never tried to understand how I was feeling, I was the stupid jokes subject in my class (because I was wearing glasses and a dental bracelet so you can imagine...) and I had no one to tell all these to.
I continued writing when I got to highschool and I was at the beginning of my relationship with my boyfriend, although I was happy with him, I still had my nostalgic moments and I was usually writing for him...
Now I can't write anymore. People often ask me why but I can't give an exact answer. Maybe, I was writing because I felt something was missing in my life, now I don't feel that empty spot in there... maybe I'm finally being happy and I don't feel the need to fill my soul with my writing...
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@contuletz2007 (734)
• Romania
25 Oct 07
But what's with all that sadness? What's wrong? I hope it's not too bad...
Hugs,
Roxana
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@scammerwear (1433)
• Singapore
23 Oct 07
I write better when I'm overflowing with emotions. Since negative emotions feels 'heavier', its easier to build them up to the point when they pour out as words. Not very healthy though :p
One way I found to be very helpful for writing positive material is using our 'uplink' to the err.. 'upper management' if you know what I mean. The emotions are easier to build up, yet way more healthier. Helps improve your mood too. Talk about divine inspiration aye? ;D
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
24 Oct 07
Oh, I like the way you put that, the explanation about negative emotions being heavier!
I have at times used the divine inspiration, but right now there are just some things going on with me that I'm not ready to deal with properly, if that makes sense.
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
25 Oct 07
Haha, I'm so glad you understand! There are so many people who are so fluffy about all the spiritual stuff, but I really don't want to deal with anyone right now when I know I'm a mess, and there are steps I should be taking that I'm not. I have to figure out what steps I'm taking in my life first. If I have to, I'll go for advice, but the problem is that I already know what I'll be told, so it doesn't help much. lol
Thank you!
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@scammerwear (1433)
• Singapore
25 Oct 07
LOL, I know all too well. No better way to get your @55 whipped then, reporting back when you KNOW you have to get that 'little problem' fixed...
*Hugs* Be well and may that which you hold divine, be with you always.
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@BayleighGray (4334)
• United States
23 Oct 07
Lecanis!!!
I cant believe this, I really thought I was the only one who could write good poetry when Im feeling like total sh!t! LOL
I too have tried to write happy poems and they come out sounding really corny and crappy. Do you think that poetry is just supposed to come from an unhappy soul?? I have read many beautiful love poems that are sad. Anytime Im feeling down about something it pours from me like you say it does you. That is so cool we share this!! As unhappy as it sounds, it makes me feel good! LOL
I dont think one should live more and write less. Regardless things are going to come our way to make us feel sad or blue in some way shape or form, and I think writting it down and turning it into poetry is good therapy. Letting your emotions out on paper in any way is good for the soul, wether we are happy or sad.
Bay Lay Gray xx
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@BayleighGray (4334)
• United States
24 Oct 07
Your welcome! And yes we do! ; )
I would like to write more, but I tend to get writers block when I try. When Im not able to I def have so much to say and then soon forget or Im not able to put my thoughts on paper like I want them to sound. Too bad I cant put one of the PC Pens to my head and it would record all my thoughts and I could just hook it up to my pc and transfer it to MS Word LOL
Bay xx
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@BayleighGray (4334)
• United States
23 Oct 07
LOL Really good xbox! Your a natrual!!
Bay xx
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@xiaozi513 (32)
• China
27 Oct 07
i never wrote a poem.And i rarely write whenever i was happy or bad.
@annettenasser (2992)
• Kuwait
23 Oct 07
Im not a great poet writer but i do sometimes and it happens to me either. sometimes it just coems like a falling water that you cant stop writting but there are times that you need to write very urgent like you already reach the deadlines but nothing comes out to my mind,, it is normal..but we have to come-up with the better way to over come such thing as this.
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@MsTickle (25180)
• Australia
26 Oct 07
Maybe you write when you are sad in order to disassociate yourself from the sorrow in your life. Putting it on paper gets it out from inside of you. If you look at all the well known poets they lived, ate and breathed their craft...it was a part of them. Their poetry exposed their soul which they then shared with others. I guess it's up to you to make of it what you will. Hopefully you don't need to write all the time because you are not always sad.
@aissha (2036)
• India
23 Oct 07
i'm trying really hard to write as i feel that i can write and i want to earn money out of it ,i can think and can write ,u check my blog http://aisha-blogs.blogspot.com//
in your case i think you can write though i hvn't read any poem of urs but i know u more than 6 months now as u have very conventional life and quite sensibilities which make me feel u must have the potential it may be that u need lil polishing and that polishing can be practise means u keep writing and u never know u can do what....
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@buliangxianren (425)
• China
23 Oct 07
there are so much you want tell others when you are sad. it seems that it can help you walking out of sadness and sharing sadness. then you are not so sad as before.when you are happy, you are happy not want to waste time.
@topei12 (272)
• Philippines
23 Oct 07
I remember writing a poem as our school assignment in English, we must use different figures of speech, i.e., simile, metaphor, personification, etc. My teacher was happy about my poem but when she discovered that most of my classmates poem were like mine she thought I let them copy my assignment. But I told her that I just handed them my paper to give them the idea how to use the figures of speech in the poem. She was furious.
@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
24 Oct 07
Wow, I can't imagine thinking someone copied something like poetry. I'm so used to thinking as poetry as something very personal. Of course when I write poems for myself rather than for an assignment, it's very different than what you're talking about.
@rpeck2000 (95)
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23 Oct 07
Most of my poetry only spills forth at moments of extreme emotion - usually annoyance and anger! Its my let out valve!
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