A Sweet Proposal To Marry?

@shak143 (1280)
India
November 3, 2007 12:54am CST
Sweet Proposal When I saw your name next to mine, In our wedding card, I felt blessed. When I saw you smile, Seeing me in traditional bride groom dress, I felt teased. When I held your hand, During the marriage rituals, I felt responsible. When you entered my lonely bachelor life, And changed it into a heavenly abode, I felt lucky. When you showed the same love as I did, Towa rds my parents, I felt proud. When you scolded me, For neglecting my health amidst my hectic work, I felt pampered. When I saw you scream, Crying out of labour pains, I felt helpless. When I saw tears of happiness in your eyes, As you looked at our kid, I felt blessed once again. * * * All these feelings have bloomed in my heart, But are yet to blossom in reality. As these are feelings I long to feel, For these are still unfelt. WILL YOU MARRY ME?????????????? How is it?is it nice?
2 responses
@ayou82 (3450)
• Philippines
3 Nov 07
Wow!! I love that.. I really do love that..Thats really emotional like when my hubby asked me for that...the feeling is really different. Good Job!!! I know she will definately say YES!
@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
3 Nov 07
This is awesome shak! Very nicely and thoughtfully written. You do have a flair for writing - keep it up. smiles..