A Sweet Proposal To Marry?
By shak143
@shak143 (1280)
India
November 3, 2007 12:54am CST
Sweet Proposal
When I saw your name next to mine,
In our wedding card,
I felt blessed.
When I saw you smile,
Seeing me in traditional bride groom dress, I felt teased.
When I held your hand,
During the marriage rituals,
I felt responsible.
When you entered my lonely bachelor life, And changed it into a heavenly abode, I felt lucky.
When you showed the same love as I did, Towa rds my parents, I felt proud.
When you scolded me,
For neglecting my health amidst my hectic work, I felt pampered.
When I saw you scream,
Crying out of labour pains,
I felt helpless.
When I saw tears of happiness in your eyes, As you looked at our kid, I felt blessed once again.
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All these feelings have bloomed in my heart, But are yet to blossom in reality.
As these are feelings I long to feel,
For these are still unfelt.
WILL YOU MARRY ME??????????????
How is it?is it nice?
2 responses
@mimpi1911 (25464)
• India
3 Nov 07
This is awesome shak! Very nicely and thoughtfully written. You do have a flair for writing - keep it up.
smiles..