The Poem i wrote to my Love
By Torry1020
@Torry1020 (42)
China
November 21, 2007 12:16am CST
I worte this poem for my love, i am sorry if it is bad
Dreams
I have many dreams
Small dreams
I may know one person
I dont know his eyes
I dont know his voice
But i can share him my happiness and sorrow
I have many dreams
Beautiful dreams
I may love one person
I know his eyes
I know his voice
I can share him my heart and feelings
I have many dreams
Romantic dreams
I can meet one person who i miss
I can stare at his eyes
I can taste his voice
I can share him my touch and kiss
I have many dreams
Luxurious dreams
I will marry one people who i love
I can see his eyes every morning and night
I can hear his voice with every sunrise and sunset
I can share him my body and soul
I have many dreams
Sad dreams
I will die with one person beside me
I can see his tears
I can hear his crying
I can share him my last heartbeat and breath
Oh, my darling!
I want to share you my happiness and sorrow
I want to share you my heart and feelings
I want to share you my touch and kiss
I want to share you my body and soul
I want to share you my last heartbeat and breath
I want to share you all of my dreams
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6 responses
@Torry1020 (42)
• China
21 Nov 07
Thank you so much buddy, i am not a poet, i am just an employee who works in a company which deals in Mobile phone games
@Petercheung (681)
• China
21 Nov 07
Where you got the poem?from your mind?from your heart?Fine,Continue your writting.I will read everyone you wrote.Come on!
@Petercheung (681)
• China
21 Nov 07
Is that you think?I dont think so.lolAnywat it is a good poem about love.right?
@angel1118 (21)
• China
23 Nov 07
Ok! now i had finished the reading, one word for you--Great!
you are a great writer,
you are a great dreamer,
you are a great Chinese,
you are also a great manager!