The Poem i wrote to my Love

China
November 21, 2007 12:16am CST
I worte this poem for my love, i am sorry if it is bad Dreams I have many dreams Small dreams I may know one person I dont know his eyes I dont know his voice But i can share him my happiness and sorrow I have many dreams Beautiful dreams I may love one person I know his eyes I know his voice I can share him my heart and feelings I have many dreams Romantic dreams I can meet one person who i miss I can stare at his eyes I can taste his voice I can share him my touch and kiss I have many dreams Luxurious dreams I will marry one people who i love I can see his eyes every morning and night I can hear his voice with every sunrise and sunset I can share him my body and soul I have many dreams Sad dreams I will die with one person beside me I can see his tears I can hear his crying I can share him my last heartbeat and breath Oh, my darling! I want to share you my happiness and sorrow I want to share you my heart and feelings I want to share you my touch and kiss I want to share you my body and soul I want to share you my last heartbeat and breath I want to share you all of my dreams
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6 responses
@nishurs (582)
• India
21 Nov 07
hey the lines are awesome and are u you a professional poet
• China
21 Nov 07
Thank you so much buddy, i am not a poet, i am just an employee who works in a company which deals in Mobile phone games
• China
21 Nov 07
Where you got the poem?from your mind?from your heart?Fine,Continue your writting.I will read everyone you wrote.Come on!
• China
22 Nov 07
Thank you and it was from the deep place of my heart
@ravibabli (1557)
• India
21 Nov 07
It is sweet poem because it's your dream
• China
21 Nov 07
Is that you think?I dont think so.lolAnywat it is a good poem about love.right?
• China
22 Nov 07
perfect and romantic! wish your dreams come true soon! cheers!
@Alina99 (14)
• China
22 Nov 07
Good,Good and go on haha
• China
23 Nov 07
Ok! now i had finished the reading, one word for you--Great! you are a great writer, you are a great dreamer, you are a great Chinese, you are also a great manager!