My poem I wrote from my experiences as a child!

United States
November 24, 2007 5:48pm CST
I wrote this poem from my memories of the things I went through as an abused child. Can anyone relate ? Have you gotten through life even though your childhood was hell? Are you a better person for it now? Have you made peace with it? Rate this poem 1-5 one ok 5 great! It's in a contest, pray I win! I will be writing more of my poems again. Mask preview! Exploding destruction rips to shreds and tosses heaping piles of confusion throughout torn pieces of flesh pulse and ache in a child, this child quick and sure reality pictures of ugly evil and pitiful sakes forbidden tracts stomped and ruined hurt so deep and wide in a child, this child terror and fright kicks and fights a child, an iron child make believe? No! a child, this child, intruders brutal force pain so keen a piercing pain, iron child's fierce return laughter, grabbing and stabbing pain lust entangled, a madman? games? Insane! a stone cold reaction fuels anger in action, in an iron child, a child, this child, worlds pass in and out mixed emotions play and prey viciously about reality? rage? terror? pain? racked with confusion in a child, spread out to be devoured, a child, yes! this child, an iron child
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