my wedding vows
By livinloud72
@livinloud72 (24)
United States
December 3, 2007 8:28pm CST
need a little help tell me what you think of this first revison
through darkness falls
till sunlight surenders
dark till dawn
sunrise to sunrise
warm summer days
cold winter nights
when we have very little
when we feast alot
with days of good health
or ever burdening pain
while we're still young
or years a aging
the flowers forever blooming
no other person shall spoil
to you i shall remain loyal
to want you more and more each day
till this body is no more
for if i depart before our time
over you i will shine
the light of my love you will feel
for you and our son my son is real
through the test of time
like grains of sand
together we shall journey
across these lands
for the four winds they may rage
lightning strikes volcanoes blow
seas unrest and shores disapearing
end of time it may be nearing
the angels trumpets tell the time
man will no longer war or wager
the wrath of god will be anger
if we're apart never i give up
till we rest as one
through the never we may see
the words forever we will be
loveing one another till the end of time
let this ring bear my sighn
of my love evermore you shall know
thanks livinloud72
1 response
@ersmommy1 (12588)
• United States
4 Dec 07
Pretty good!
Here is what my hubby wrote for our wedding...
Come to me
Meet me in Springtime
With the sweet song of sparrow
Be near me,
Wherever you walk is wherever I'll go
Stand by me
Both through the joy
and the sorrow
Walk with me,
Neither lead
Nor to follow
Care for me,
Love who I am.
And Who I'll be tomorrow
Rest beside me,
at days end,
When limbs start to slow
I'll sleep there with thee
As the world passes nigh,
By the shade of old tree
We'll est,
You and me,
Content there to lie
'neath the darkening sky
Six years later that still takes my breath away. I have it framed and on my desk at home! LOVE IT! LOVE HIM!
