what is behind your heart
By mary855230
@mary855230 (121)
China
January 9, 2008 12:47am CST
life is not all roses,everyone will try everything under the sun. I am optimism,my friend all say im strong,brave,boldness, but i dont think so, that is the surface of my heart . that is the side of my character.
To be honest, i hind my sadness behind my heart.i dont wannar everyone see my flabbiness,disability. i do the best in the face of other people . i will go ahead .leave the sadness in a concealed place .
2 responses
@sojournseeker (1244)
• United States
10 Jan 08
Good prose on accepting a powerful emotion such as love and understanding where it manifests is a good subject you covered, creatively; however, you have some typographical (misspelled words) errors I would like to address.
"hind" should be hide my sadness
"i dont wannar everyone see my flabbiness" should be I do not want everyone to flabbiness, as my disability
Otherwise, this is rewarding because it describes a positive view from a position where pain and suffering overtook the human conscious boundary
sharing the light and happy new year,
Miss Erica Hidvegi, the Enlightenment_Advisor, B.A. Psych/M.A. Transpersonal Studies- Cnslng/Author, Artist, Photographer, Entrepreneur & Freelance extraordinaire
http://www.authorhouse.com/BookStore/ItemDetail~bookid~16058.aspx
@mary855230 (121)
• China
10 Jan 08
thx, my dear friend. thank for you pointing out my mistakes . i ll notice the spell of words .good luck .
@adnanezzi (243)
• India
9 Jan 08
true men are those with a smile on there face and sorrow in there heart.
if what ur saying is true then i can presume that u r a lonely shy person. try to see the other side of life also
@mary855230 (121)
• China
10 Jan 08
thank,my friend . to be honest , i like talk with my friend when i m sad. after talk, i will happy . exactly. happy in my face in most of time ,sad only be hided . good luck .
