Poetry by ZeN - ¤ Venomous Cycle ¤
By zenmachado
@zenmachado (1617)
United States
January 24, 2008 8:57am CST
Some Gnarly Poetry
¤ Venomous Cycle ¤
When light is driven into my essence,
I commence a flow of eternal glee.
Yet then its swallowed by the darkness,
Of my poisonous malignancy.
- ZeN
2 responses
@saivenkaat802003 (4823)
• India
15 Mar 08
Come.. let's brandish out the poisonous malignancy..
With high positive Vibrations lining with me.
And these shallow despondence buried permanently,
Shall therefore,. we will walk, with all minds free.
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@zenmachado (1617)
• United States
15 Mar 08
I wonder do you patronize, and actually not feel the pain
Are the words I express, only spoken in vain
I feel as if you only speak in poetry to act as if you corelate
But to each idea there is debate, so Ill just act out the same way
@kuirqs (512)
• Philippines
25 Jan 08
It can make for a longer poem, it has a potential of being good, if you elaborate more on it. You could try visiting http://www.onestopwriteshop.com, an online community for writers not only of poetry, but other genre as well. Let me know if you're interested and I can tell you more about the site.
