Spoken Word Poetry - Finding Love

United States
February 4, 2008 12:46am CST
Journey to seek like walking through the desert... You feel dry in the heat, exhausted now your head hurts... You don't seek lust, desires or craving pleasure... You hope love falls on you like dove's feathers... Searching day by day, every season, any weather... Carrying hope at all times being guided by the Successor... You say to yourself you are charming and you are tender... Put your love on the line and see you're not a pretender... Skip the gestures, guide your actions, an adventurer... Build creativity in your mind, like everyday inventers... Hearts and souls also seek, best to live like the meek... Soulmates across the globe, hearts of many that are sweet... Women those in need want to be swept off their feet... Feeling the vibe of passion, journey it like overseas... The right words and actions like down on bended knees... No begging or please, walk to walk you earn your keep... Confident at what you do, time for you to plant the seed... Love hits you where it spreads, like a cut watch it bleed... A fire to make it grow, a daily bread you need to feed... Once you find it, watch it grow swiftly... Faith, hope and love always feels heavenly... There is no boundaries, walk free there is plenty... Unconditional that it be, once it syncs eternally... You're not alone, someone calls you in the journey... Finding love is wonderful, it's where you live eternally... ~~The Dark Angel~~
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izzyromero80
@izzyromero80 (48)
• United States
4 Feb 08
Man you got some skills. Like the one you made on about you The Dark Angel I was digging that one bro. You should like keep this up. Blog it or do something you might even get paid well for doing this. You got mad skills I'm telling you. I mean seriously I hear a lot of junk in hip hop, rap I mean I'm not just saying this but you got better lyrics, poetry or rhymes than some of rappers doing albums - 50 Cent, The Game - You remind me of a natural poet as if you were Kanye West, Common Sense or Jay Z - Or like Redman making your lyrics a metaphor and unique. Keep it up bro
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darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1498)
• United States
4 Feb 08
Hey bro I appreciate the compliments. Hip Hop, music and poetry will forever stay in my heart. I thank the one above for this gift. In due time and hopefully I can get an album going. Thanks
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jerritts1mom
@jerritts1mom (816)
• United States
4 Feb 08
WOW, this reminded me of freestyle poetry at the clubs... You described the journey of life and love flawlessly.I loved it.
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darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1498)
• United States
4 Feb 08
Thanks for the comment. I got a couple of more you can check out: http://www.mylot.com/w/discussions/1395639.aspx http://www.mylot.com/w/discussions/1392085.aspx Poetry, music, writing songs is my thing. I'll be posting more soon. I love to freestyle (no pen no paper)
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Hazel Funcion
@Zelmarq (12585)
• Cebu City, Philippines
4 Feb 08
Love is such a splendid thing. THis is a wonderful love poem you made, a feeling of a person in love, its as if you are alone in the world with the person you love and as though you have a world of your own. Keep up the good work and many many more poems.
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Hazel Funcion
@Zelmarq (12585)
• Cebu City, Philippines
4 Feb 08
I love poetry and I a happy that you are making use of the talent that is given to you, treasure it and share it to others, we know that it will be used to touch others lives. I wish I could be as a good poetry writer like you, so natural so effortless. You know i am one of those hopeless romantics and trying hard poets.LOL Have a nice day!
darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1498)
• United States
4 Feb 08
Thanks again for responding this comment. Most definitely I will be posting more of these from time to time. Whenever I get them posted I'll let you know. I give credit due where it needs to be for the One above that let's me speak it and promote it. Take care
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