My Written Song - "I Miss You"

United States
February 4, 2008 1:29am CST
Counting the days and moments that pass us by... Thinking and wondering about you... I know you feel the same, Cuz I can hear you call my name... We were destined for each other, Felt that way since the day I met you... I knew right then I fell in love with you... I heard you crying for me, I see your heart is in pain... So just hold on to me, watch your pains fade away... And what you feeling for me, it's that magic you make... It's your words that so sweet, for the words that you say... I miss you... Honey I know that were far and sometimes life can be hard... Missing you missing me, wondering just where you are... Holding you close in my touch, baby I do miss your touch... I'm in love.........baby wait for me I'm coming for you. Feeling your skin, the look in your eyes Girl I got hypnotized... Feeling your hair, the love that we share Girl I know that you're mine... Baby you see we were meant to be Girl I know that you're fine... For the love I send it will never end Girl I'm right by your side... There's nothing to fear, because you're near to me... When you're alone, I'll be close to you Now that we're far, I'll be missing you When you are cold, I'll be holding you Promise I, I'm coming back for you....I miss you
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jerritts1mom
@jerritts1mom (816)
• United States
4 Feb 08
This is really a beautiful sentiment. Well written,had some good flow to it. keep up the good work,hope to read more soon :)
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piatlocke23
@piatlocke23 (147)
• Philippines
4 Feb 08
you melt my heart when i read your poems. this is touching like i can feel it. i mean words like this you spoke are natural and they do not sound like other artists even the ones i can say are written in tagalog. i hope one day you can make it in life with your poems and even music. i believe in you - and you have the voice too so let it be known and don't wait for it to just fall in your lap. i know you can do it
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darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1488)
• United States
4 Feb 08
I just let it flow where it takes place - whether the song or poem touches someone or they read it in a way that can relate to them. I like writing these types that touch the heart and enter it through the mind. Poetry always soothes the soul I have to say.
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Hazel Funcion
@Zelmarq (12607)
• Cebu City, Philippines
4 Feb 08
Long distance love affairs, hard for the one who left but harder still for the one left alone and cold with empty arms, but a heart full of love. Days are like eternity when you are not with the person who care about, dragging on day after day, head pounding, heart longing. Its great to be in love.
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Hazel Funcion
@Zelmarq (12607)
• Cebu City, Philippines
4 Feb 08
Im glad you have tried to keep that love alive, never give up, keep on loving, it great to love get hurt than never loving at all.
darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1488)
• United States
4 Feb 08
Yes it is great to be in love. And who I love after I've known for almost 2 years we still hold on to it. Heart full of love is what to carry and cherish until to meet that special person again. That's why I say love has no boundaries.
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izzyromero80
@izzyromero80 (48)
• United States
4 Feb 08
I'm telling you bro you got that talent. You should definitely get into the studios, start making records, albums and such. Keep writing and keep at it. If you ever go to the Philippines follow your dreams and get the right people that support what you do. Good work bro
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darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1488)
• United States
4 Feb 08
All in due time because that's one of my goals and missions when I get back - promoting music and getting it local. Thanks again for the comment
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pinksoda
@pinksoda (113)
• Philippines
4 Feb 08
Wow I never knew that side of you. That was wonderfully written I hope I can hear you sing it. Lucky for the person you wrote it to. I remember you told me that singing was your passion. Yes you should do it. I'm very happy for you and you might one day become successful to promote an album. If ever you make one let me know I'd be glad to buy a copy hehe. Cheers!
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darkangel079
@darkangel079 (1488)
• United States
4 Feb 08
I wanted to get it out of my system and just do something I have not done for a while. If there are those that have talents why not just express it. So far I love it. Thanks for commenting this topic
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