With or without you happy memories remain the same
By ellie333
@ellie333 (21016)
February 10, 2008 9:44am CST
Hi Guys another I poems I would just like to share. No matter what situations happen in life you will always have your memories. Please feel free to share what you think of this. Many thanks Ellie :D
With or without you happy memories remain.
Searching for dolphins on our first boat trip together
The blue moon held in your arms
The castle in the sky on the water
Just a ship at night but to us it looked like a castle
Me running barefoot down the coastal path
I slid and fell but it made us laugh
Covered in mud, cold and wet, we didn't notice
We felt the energy from the tree, it was special, just you and me.
The bus ride home, even that was fun.
The day you surprised me with my first single rose
No room at the Inn led us to Inner Hope
To the author of the book.
Sandcastles built and a childs special smile.
Money couldn't buy that feel good factor,
The singing duo up the hill
Then the warmth from your touch, missing it still.
4 responses
@joyceshookery (2057)
• United States
10 Feb 08
From beautiful memories, a poem was born, and a delightful poem at that, Ellie.
It brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing.
@joyceshookery (2057)
• United States
11 Feb 08
Thank you, Ellie. Heartfelt responses are the only ones I know, and the ones that get them are people like you and others who give me something to say in response :)
Yes, I do write, although I haven't written lately, and don't write poetry at all. If you'd like to read any of my writing, it's at http://mysite.verizon.net/res6r8se/writersshowcase/
Hugs,
Joyce
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@littleowl (7157)
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10 Feb 08
hi ellie have just read you other poem all your poems are good look forward to next one will get mine out and send you some-littleowl
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