A job covering letter

@Salehd (131)
Syria
February 14, 2008 4:00am CST
Hi all; I would like to submit my CV for the Russian Embassy in my country, and I am writing a cover letter for it. Here is the cover letter; what do you think of it? "Dear Sir or Madam; I am writing to enquire whether you have a vacancy in your embassy for an IT Manager. I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your consideration. As you will see from my resume. I have a great experience on the filed of IT, including LAN, WAN networking, windows technologies and others. I am sure that working at the Russian Embassy will benefit both of us. I will get experience working in a diplomatic place, and will share my professional experience with others in the embassy. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my credentials and experience. The Russian embassy is a very exciting place. I hope that you will find my experience, interests, and character intriguing enough to warrant a face-to-face meeting, as I am confidant that I could provide value to you as a member of your team My name"
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@jayman32 (267)
• Australia
14 Feb 08
hello, may i suggest a few things? i am a (your age) professional person with (??)years of experience as an IT manager(your experience). i am writting this short letter to bring your attention to my availability & express my interest in joining your fatastic team within the embassy...... try to find the name of the prson you want to read this & address it to them as this helps. this short blurb is of the top of my head so sorry its a little short.. good luck.
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