was there a particular poem that you loved at one point in your life?
By secretbear
@secretbear (19448)
Philippines
February 17, 2008 6:36am CST
i stumbled upon this poem back when i was in college and i just sooo loved it the very first time i read it! i felt i could relate with it and it touched my heart so much and everytime i read it, i felt like crying. ^__^;; i loved it so much that i even posted it to my website and written it in each of my notebooks. ^__^
L'envoi
from a Greek epitaph
I who loved beauty was not beautiful;
I chreished truth and yet I was not true;
I who remembered am so soon forgotten,
But I loved you.
I who loved mirth was well acquaint with sorrow;
I honoured freedom, yet I was not free;
But once, indeed, I knew the just equation,
For you loved me.
but i eventually forgot this poem when i got so busy with work. good thing i thought of updating my website, i saw this poem again and i realized i still love it. ^__^
so what about you? any poem that you love? what can you say about l'envoi?
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27 responses
@christiana25 (181)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
When I was in high school, a guy friend wrote a poem in my school journal. For some reason, I still haven't forgotten the lines. Here it goes..
I talk to the trees
but they don't listen to me
I talk to the stars
but they never hear me
The wind has the time
to stop and hear what I say
I talked to them all
in vain.
Then suddenly my words
reached someone else's heart
Touched someone else's
heartstrings too
I tell you my love,
And while you're listening to me
I fin'lly see them come true.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
that is just so sweet! for whom did he dedicated it? ^__^
a guy from the past also made a poem, for me, and it was really deep but I like it because he called me his light and the "one". ^__^
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
20 Feb 08
its really sweet to be written of a poem by someone special. ^__^
@Jemina (5770)
•
18 Feb 08
If You Think You're Beaten
by Kriston
If you think you're beaten, you are,
If you think you dare not, you don't.
If you'd like to win, but think you can't,
It's almost for sure, you won't.
If you think you're losing, you've lost.
For out in the world we find -
Success begins with a person's will,
It's all in the state of mind.
If you think you're outclassed, you are,
You've got to think high to rise.
You have to stay with it,
In order to win the prize.
Life's battles don't always go,
To the one with the better plan.
For more often than not, you will win,
If only you think you can.
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
nice poem. I agree with it. I think this is the same with, love yourself first before another person loves you. and respect yourself first before other people respect you. whatever you think yourself is, is what other people will think of you. ^__^
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@diansinta (7544)
• Indonesia
25 Feb 08
I've been touch by a poem wrote by Sapardi Djoko Damono and indonesia artis
It's goes like this :
Aku Ingin
aku ingin mencintaimu dengan sederhana;
dengan kata yang tak sempat diucapkan
kayu kepada api yang menjadikannya abu
aku ingin mencintaimu dengan sederhana;
dengan isyarat yang tak sempat disampaikan
awan kepada hujan yang menjadikannya tiada
in english :
I want to
I want to love you plainly;
with words which get not opportunity to be spoken
from the wood to the fire who make him into ashes
I want to love you plainly;
with the sign that get not delifered
from the cloud to the rain who make him gone.
short like that :D
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
28 Feb 08
that's a very sweet poem! simple yet full of emotions. plain like words. ^__^
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@diansinta (7544)
• Indonesia
29 Feb 08
This poem has been written in many wedding invitation.
I'm so happy that this poem touch you both like it touch me. I be happy to share my rate for both of you and visiting you in your discussion :D
See you there !
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@drannhh (15219)
• United States
17 Feb 08
I love that poem, too! It is an excellent translation. Thanks much for sharing it here! You might like this one, too. Although familiar to many, like the epitaph you mentioned, this one by Ella Wheeler Wilcox has a timelessness:
Laugh and the world laughs with you.
Weep, and you weep alone:
For this stolid old earth
Has need of your mirth,
It has troubles enough of its own.
Sing, and the hills will echo it:
Sigh, and it's lost on the air;
For they want full measure
Of all your pleasure,
But nobody wants your care.
Feast, and your halls are crowded,
Fast, and they'll pass you by;
Succeed and give,
And they'll let you live,
But fail - and they'll let you die.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
hey drannhh! I like that poem. I like abut its message on living life to the fullest. being happy and positive. I think that's a good reminder for all people, that we all should live life happily and not be taken down by worries and sorrow. thanks so much for sharing that poem drannhh. ^__^
@shaggin (72141)
• United States
18 Feb 08
I love that poem! Its one of my favorites. I thin about the words to that poem a lot. The first few lines are the best! I love poetry.
@kun2349 (23381)
• Singapore
17 Feb 08
There's one poem that i like, and when i 1st heard it, it just touches me and it's so real.. But it's been so long i last heard it.. But it's from the movie, In Her shoes, when cameron diaz recite to her sister on the day of her sister's wedding.. hehe ^_^
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
awwww... that's a very sweet poem kun. I like it. it's really full of feelings. I can feel the love and inspiration. I don't know about the movie though. but I love the poem. I wonder if e.e. cummings was in love when he wrote this.. ^__^ so to whom did you or will you dedicate this poem kun? ^__^
@kun2349 (23381)
• Singapore
17 Feb 08
i've found the poem.. it's by e.e cummings ^_^
I carry your heart with me.
I carry it in my heart.
I'm never without it.
Anywhere i go, u go, my dear.
And whatever is done by only me,
is your doing, my darling.
I fear no fate,
for you are my fate, my sweet.
I want no world,
for, beautiful, you are my world.
Here is the deepest secret no one knows.
Here is the root of the root,
and the bud of the bud,
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life,
which grows higher than the soul can hope,
or the mind can hide.
It is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart.
I carry your heart,
i carry it in my heart..
^_^
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@dorkystreak (12)
• New Caledonia
18 Feb 08
Oh my god! I was actually about to write the same thing. This is one of my favorite love poems. This girl who I had a mutual attraction with before was the first one to recite that to me. I love it!!
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
28 Feb 08
I cannot remember the poem but the one phrase to reach out and touch the face of God it was written by a pilot and is about beauty of flying I am sure you must remember it but it was a favorite of mine. also Carl Frosts two ways in the woods.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
28 Feb 08
hi hatley! i'm not familiar with that poem but i'm sure its beautiful because its really amazing to fly. ^__^
@vera5d (4005)
• United States
29 Feb 08
is this the poem you were thinking of?
High Flying
Oh! I have slipped the surly bonds of Earth
And danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings;
Sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth
Of sun-split clouds, — and done a hundred things
You have not dreamed of — wheeled and soared and swung
High in the sunlit silence. Hov'ring there,
I've chased the shouting wind along, and flung
My eager craft through footless halls of air. . . .
Up, up the long, delirious burning blue
I've topped the wind-swept heights with easy grace
Where never lark, or ever eagle flew —
And, while with silent, lifting mind I've trod
The high untrespassed sanctity of space,
Put out my hand, and touched the face of God.
— John Gillespie Magee, Jr
Do you mean Robert Frost's the road less traveled? That is a good one, too...
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@academic2 (7000)
• Uganda
17 Feb 08
I made one for a truely young love I met many years ago! She was younger than me by 7 years, I was in was already preparing to do University entry exams in High school, she was just joining first year in Hight school, I loved her so much I thought I would do anything to wait for her until she was a full woman ready to marry me. She diddnt marry me after all-She couldnt even finish high school-it was one hot misplaced love, because the beautiful little girl later turned out to be nun, she simply put off marriage from her agenda in life.
I sent her this poem as i joined university;
I wish everyday for things impossible for you
Like Holding the sun in my hands for you
Like Throwing a full blue moon at you
Like walking around with you in jungle
Feeling good and Lucky with you
My Lucky Gal
If I said I didn’t love you
If I said I didn’t care about you
If I said I didn’t dream about you
If I said I didn’t wish you the heavens
I would be a liar
Lying to my conscience and to
My Lucky Gal
Hear me now Lucky
You the Gal of Luck
Even if it hurts
Close your eyes
Cross the red line
Pick me up oh Gal
Even if for just a Lucky while
For Just a little Lucky while
My Lucky Gal?
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
oh my gosh that is just so sweet! I love your poem academic. it touched my heart. there is a lot of feelings in it. I can feel the love in it. too bad the girl became a nun. but I'm sure she was touched by your poem too. ^__^
@mgmagana (3618)
• United States
1 Mar 08
i've always loved the footprints poem
One night I dreamed I was walking along the beach with the Lord.
Many scenes from my life flashed across the sky.
In each scene I noticed footprints in the sand.
Sometimes there were two sets of footprints,
other times there were one set of footprints.
This bothered me because I noticed
that during the low periods of my life,
when I was suffering from anguish, sorrow or defeat
I could see only one set of footprints.
So I said to the Lord,
"You promised me Lord,
that if I followed you,
you would walk with me always.
But I have noticed that during
the most trying periods of my life
there have only been one
set of footprints in the sand.
Why, when I needed you most,you have not been there for me?"
The Lord replied,
"The times when you have
seen only one set of footprints in the sand,is when I carried you."
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
5 Mar 08
hi mgamana! ^__^ i liked that poem too. its really touching but at the same time, it kinda makes me feel guilty. .
@cdparazo (5765)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
I have always loved the poem entitled INVICTUS. I got to know the poem when I was in 1st year high school and since then I have never forgotten it. A lot of things that has happened in my life, the chances that I have taken, the decisions that I have made which speaks of the message of the poem.
Invictus
by William Ernest Henley; 1849-1903
Out of the night that covers me,
Black as the Pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds, and shall find me, unafraid.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate;
I am the captain of my soul.
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
OMG! that's our organization's "code of ethics"! when i was in college i joined this college-based organization and while i was applying together with many other students, the members made us memorized that poem with all our heart. we recited that poem during the application process and each mistake was equaled with a certain punishment. .
@kat_princess (1470)
• Philippines
25 Feb 08
I loved the poems I composed back in high school for my first love but I guess those poems are but memories.I know I have to move on now.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
28 Feb 08
i did compose some poems too when i was in high school. and like you they are all but memories now. ^__^
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
18 Feb 08
whoa! is that poem about a ghost? or a hallucination? or an imagined being? ^__^;;
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
20 Feb 08
oh i see. ^__^;; yeah, that sounded more romantic. LOL thanks for that. ^__^
@WhiteDoveLost (139)
• United States
18 Feb 08
I think it means there was a lover who left her. So he is not there day after day, but inside he is still there, and she wants him gone.
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@punlonnjack (1308)
• United States
17 Feb 08
just thought i would share that poert.com is a great site to publish your poems and to read other poems people have written.enjoy.
@punlonnjack (1308)
• United States
17 Feb 08
sorry correction should say poetry.com sorry
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@vera5d (4005)
• United States
29 Feb 08
what a great discussion secretbear!
i like your poem a lot...One of my favorites is the love song of J. Alfred Prufolk...it is too long to post here, but here is the link
http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html
I also like a lot of walt whitman poetry...(also much too much to post here!)
Another one I like is "God's World" by Edna St. Vincent Millay...
O world, I cannot hold thee close enough!
Thy winds, thy wide grey skies!
Thy mists that roll and rise!
Thy woods, this autumn day, that ache and sag
And all but cry with colour! That gaunt crag
To crush! To lift the lean of that black bluff!
World, World, I cannot get thee close enough!
Long have I known a glory in it all,
But never knew I this;
Here such a passion is
As stretcheth me apart. Lord, I do fear
Thou'st made the world too beautiful this year.
My soul is all but out of me, let fall
No burning leaf; prithee, let no bird call.
I got into her after a friend of mine mailed me a tiny piece of paper with this quote of her's on it:
“Where you used to be, there is a hole in the world, which I find myself constantly walking around in the daytime, and falling in at night. I miss you like hell.” I have kept this quote in the back of my head for the longest time...
There are so many good poems out there...this site will keep any poetry lover entertained for hours:
http://poets.org
I have written some 3000 poems now...they are all awful...i put some on my helium page and so far no one has really liked them, lol. None of them even earned a penny so far! My hubby has one of his degrees in literature...even he doesn't like them!
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
29 Feb 08
hi vera! i'm glad you think that this is a great discussion. i can tell that you really are a poem lover. nice to know that. i'm sure there is at least someone that likes your poem, like hatley. you just don't know about it. ^__^
@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Feb 08
Thelove songof J Alfred Prufolk was another of my favorites and will always remember the part about him eating a peach. I really like your poem. I have written afew too but not was able to get them published but had a haiku published in a small poetry magazine for which I received nothing but a thanks but I still slog away writing them. I have a BA in English but as I did not want to teach it never really did me any good except for what I learned. So I ended up working in a libraryfor many years did some writing but never had anything published.I will have to check out that poets.org site . thanks
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@dorkystreak (12)
• New Caledonia
18 Feb 08
I love poems. Most of the time, I can spend hours on my computer just browsing on fiction press for them. My most favorite would have to be "I Carry Your Heart" by E.E. Cummings. But that was mentioned already. I also like poems by Edgar Allan Poe, especially alone. I especially like the last line in that one. But there is this one poem from the movie 10 Things I Hate About You that really stuck with me for a while. It goes as follows:
I hate the way you talk to me,
and the way you cut your hair.
I hate the way you drive my car,
I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots
and the way you read my mind.
I hate you so much it makes me sick,
it even makes me rhyme.
I hate the way you're always right,
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
even worse when you make me cry.
I hate it when you're not around
and the fact that you didn't call.
But mostly, I hate the way I don't hate you,
not even close
not even a little bit
not even at all.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
20 Feb 08
T.T you just reminded me of Heath Ledger, may he rest in peace in heaven. .
@Ohara_1983 (4117)
• Kuwait
18 Feb 08
yes i have, specially when my father lift us, and go to another woman i wrote, i never post to any website but i keep it to me till know the writen note book is with me, sorry for not sharing because it make cry when i will start all over again.
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
oh that's okay ohara. that poem must be really sad and a very personal matter to you. i understand if you can't share it here. i don't wanna make you cry. ^__^
@ESKARENA1 (18261)
•
18 Feb 08
Well, when i was a student I first read Masc of anarchy by Peter Bysh Shelly, it is absolutely amazing and quite a wonderful statement about politics in early 19th century England. It ends with the Stanza,
Men of England
rise from slumber
in unvanquishable number
break the chains that, when in sleep, fell on you
ye are many, they are few
stiring stuff indeed, a veritable inspiration
blessed be
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
that's really an interesting poem. even if i don't know quite how to analyze it, i could feel its depth and inspiration. ^__^
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
hi vanities. thanks for appreciating the poem and me. ^__^
@saivenkaat802003 (4823)
• India
21 Feb 08
What to say about the poems that i adored, loved, and cherish in my minds..
You know,after, reading this topic now, i had two thoughts in my mind.
1) whether to reproduce a best poem that i have read, as i am an ardent fan of Wordsworth, Shelley, Keats..
2) Whether to reproduce one good poem that i have written.So i took the diary in which i have written all these poems and started reading, infact started to chose the best one, and to reproduce here.. and.. i was reading my entire writing for more than half-an-hour, and net result my computer turned to screen saver mode... it was hard for me to pick one... i ended up closing the diary, with a wonder or surprise, Oh! were these lines written by me...
Take care friend:)
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
LOL you must have enjoyed reading those poems that you forgot you were myLotting! ^__^;;
@lavenderbloom (1057)
• United Arab Emirates
20 Feb 08
Hi,
I like all the poems shared in this discussion particularly the one about a girl who become a nun by academic2. There is one poem which I liked when I was a kid but don't remember the wordings. Will try to recollect from my memories. Thanks for sharing such lovely poems here. Nice day!
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
hi lavenderbloom! the poem shared by academic was really beautiful. i liked it too. ^__^
@bellaofchaos (11538)
• United States
19 Feb 08
When I was a child my gram use to read me a book called things that go bump in the night and in the front cover was an old scottish prayer/poem .. I loved it them and stil do it's short and simple and to the point.
From ghoulies to ghosties and three legged beasties and things that go bump in the night good lord deliver us.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
23 Feb 08
wow! that's an amazing book! it would be fun to read poems about scary beings like that for a change. ^__^