When you are writing your novel, and you cannot sit at the computer that long
By suspenseful
@suspenseful (40193)
Canada
February 29, 2008 6:29pm CST
That is for more than thirty minutes, and you have alloted forty-five minutes or more to writing it because well, you are writing a book and not just a short story, so you need at least that amount of time to get it right, and after thirty minutes, your head starts nodded off, you get glassy eyed, and your screen starts to appear as from another planet, do you get up and do something else, do you just wait until you head is cleared, or do you schedule the second half of writing for another time? Or do you just stay there, no matter how bad you feel and keep writing because you are afraid that if you leave, you will never get back to it?
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@chrislotz (8137)
• Canada
16 Mar 08
Well when I start to nod off when I am working on the computer, I get up and walk around or do some stretch exercises or go outside and have a smoke. Whatever, I don't sit at the computer and suffer because why bother. It isn't that important that you should feel uncomfortable. And when this happens you can't concentrate as good and may make mistakes anyways, so again, why bother. The work isn't going anywhere, running away, so go back to it again when you feel more energetic and alert. You should be enjoying this time that you are writing a book.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
17 May 08
I like to walk a lot, and I now find that if I divide my day so I do a little in the morning and the other part in the evening or afternoon, I do not get as much done, but at least what I have done does not need to be fixed up as often. I found when I worked for an hour at a time, at the end of that hour, I would have to go back the next day and do a major correction, not just a few typos.
So the walk does me good and a nap as well if it is not that good outside.
@byfaithonly (10698)
• United States
1 Mar 08
I seldom get the chance to work on my novel regularly so don't know what I would do in this situation but have also noticed I have a more difficult time working on that particularly on the computer - there are too many distractions such as oh I'll just take a short break and see what's going on in my email or myLot :(
I have found I still do my best writing with pen and paper - only thing is my handwriting is horrid so I'll write and write and write but then before I write the next 'part' I will type what I wrote onto the computer. It's extra work but it's been more effectent for me.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
2 Mar 08
I have very bad handwriting since I fell down the last two rungs of the basement steps on my left hand and broke my wrist. Since then, I have a hard time writing for long without hurting, so I have to write on a computer. I do write on my journal but it is mostly short stories or a few paragraphs, and am trying to increase my writing time and get my handwriting a little more legible. It is no good to write if you cannot understand what you read.
@byfaithonly (10698)
• United States
2 Mar 08
LOL - last year my daughter was going through some of her father's things and found some short stories I had written (he obviously took them when we got divorced). She brought them to me and I busted up laughing - yes, they were mine but I could barely read them my handwriting is so bad.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 Jul 08
I went through some of my journals and I thought no one could read them.
The writing was that bad.
@sharone74 (4837)
• United States
3 May 08
I am not quite so rigid as that. I allot time to my writing but when the muse has flown, for me, she is flown and no amount of trying to force her to return will work. Mind you I sit for hours in front of my computer every day anyway, checking on my sites, writing on my lot, doing homework on my degree which I am studying for online, and working on the internet and keeping up the maintenance on that also. Writing is something that flows out of me when it is ready to. It is not something that I can force to adhere to a schedule or something that I can arbitrarily stop once the muse has returned. I am compelled to write sometimes and sometimes I loose the thread of the story for a while and am left to pick at it until inspiration returns.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I have the muse with me all the time. It is that darned sitting down. I cannot sit for an hour or so. I tried, but I am always doing something else. I write on myLot but that does not count as novel writing which is my main love. I like making up stories, and find when I write on the computer all these thoughts are coming into my head and I just have to get them on in my Word processor.
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@newzealtralian (3930)
• Australia
5 Mar 08
I find that when I am in the writing zone, I can't stop my fingers and brain working. Writing isn't something that you can just force, you have to be in the mood for it. If you restrict the amount of time you spend on your writing, then you can actually end up causing yourself stress because the words may not flow very well. This is why a lot of students struggle to complete assignments.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
17 May 08
I have to have quietness to write, cannot even like to listen to music, unless I am writing something historical and the music is from that time period. So right now I cannot write on my novel because my husband is listening to his audio sans earphones. I write good in the morning, but my brain is not that good then, so in the afternoon or evening I am correcting the booboos I made and then I add some more or is it the other way around? Anyway more than once a day is best.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
17 May 08
If I start talking into my recorder, people will think I am crazy. I also have a bad left wrist. So I do need a computer, but I wish I had a laptop so I can go and write anywhere else. I try to write by hand and soon my wrist and the outside of my hand starts hurting. And it has been for sometime, that I find I cannot write more than a couple of sentences long hand, but on a computer, being a touch typist I can type like crazy and the ideas just come flowing from my brain.
@MichaelJay (1100)
•
26 Mar 08
I do all my original riting by pen and paper. I know it's old-fashioned but I feel it's part of the creative process.
The flow of ideas from the brain matches the flow of ink to the paper's surface.
Then I nomally do a first edit, again with pen and paper.
At this point I will start to commit to the omniscient computer but by now it feels like a job or chore rather than creativity!
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I find I am the opposite. I found it hard to write with pen and paper and more so now since my wrists got bad (broke them and most of my weight went on my left wrist and I am left handed) I wrote mainly ideas, and parts of sentences, but when I got on the computer, I could write and the words just flowed. HOwever I am not a sitter. I am more likely a person who loves to move around. So I can only spend a small time, once in the morning and once in the afternoon or evening. I do try to finish an event a day and that helps.
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@Lakota12 (42600)
• United States
1 Mar 08
your surpose to get up and move around ever so often just leave the page open then go back to it ya might have to reread what you have wrote to get back idea of where you were going with it.
Never good to set that long if you feel ill.
am not writing a book but just being here for hours I have to move I go water or something in between and then I can leave it all day and come back in the evening!
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I decided to write part of my novel in the morning, and then get back to it later. I felt that doing a certain amount of words did not work, nor did doing a certain amount of time either. It would have worked if myLot loaded quicker, but now I do a little in the morning and later in the late afternoon. I would have written more but with myLot being so slow and me wanting to finish the Digest, that does not help give me much regular novel writing time.
@Wingedman (238)
• United States
3 Mar 08
Don't make yourself suffer at the keyboard. Take a walk. Grab a notepad and write long hand if you must get it out. The screen can be evil sometimes and drain your inspiration right out of you. There is a reason some authors only write long hand and have a secretary type it, technology can hamper creativity. Use an organic medium to write and you may get a better story. This is the same reason I always edit in hard copy because I feel liberated from the chains of technology.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I have bad wrists, so I cannot write that long at longhand. I can only write for a short time. I can be creative and technological at the same time, but I am not one who wants to sit for long for anything. I start fidgetting, moving my legs, crossing my legs, get up, go to the other room, go for a walk, so sitting someplace else and writing does me no good. I love the computer, it is just the sitting for a long period of time that I hate and wondering what is going on in the other room. Maybe I would be good at audio books.
@Perspectives (7131)
• Canada
1 Mar 08
When I wrote my nearly 500 page manuscript a few years ago I stayed with it for hours and hours and hours. In my case I felt like the story was writing itself so I did not experience; "The head nodding off, glassy, eyed screen from another planet" scenario you describe.
I have been writing professionally for years and the focused approach works for me. When my brain does get numb I go downstairs and either go outside, watch television or delve into a favorite role playing game to give my 'thinker' a rest.
So far I have never lost the flow...and when I have ideas for new writing pieces I have an ideas file in Word that I jot them down in. That way I can go back and develop them when I choose to.
Happy writing...whatever your style.
Raia
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
3 May 08
It's those writers who can sit for hours at the computer and never get fat (oo I really hate them! ) and the fact that they write books on how to write, and tell of the long hours they spent sweating in front of the computer (and winding out looking like Canon or Nero Wolfe or Orson Wells in his older days, I hope). I need to get and walk around or watch Tv or do the washing or cooking. Cannot sit at the computer for hours at a time.
@writersedge (22563)
• United States
3 Mar 08
I schedule for another time. You're rubbing off on me, I started to write a novel. Fictional and far-fetched, but interesting just the same.
Since my accident, if my back, neck or shoulders start to hurt, I get off the internet. I find if I add a min. every day, then I can really stretch it to a decent amount of time. Take care.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 Jul 08
Your welcome. I find the scene idea best for me when I do not have enough time to write a whole chapter. I do find chapters difficult because they say end at an important scene, well if the guy is traveling, do you end it when he gets to the town or end it just as the bandits are about to attack the wagon train? It does seem to be a problem.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I tried various ways to go about it. For a time, I write an hour in the morning, but that meant everything else had to do and when I went to myLot, it was slower, and then I went in the afternoon, but that hindered my preparing for dinner. So now I write a little in the morning, and a little in the afternoon. I do not worry about how long or how many words, but whether to get a certain event concluded. I find that easier.
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@writersedge (22563)
• United States
17 May 08
That sounds like the best idea. Just write until you have concluded a scene. I haven't written in my novel in awhile. I think now would be a good time to get back into it. Thanks for the reminder and take care.
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@manya_pearl (1901)
• Singapore
1 Mar 08
I sit to type my story until the climax... and its not finish. I just confuse how to choose the best ending. Writing story is quiet difficult for me, even the begin is easy. I'm still learning how to make a good story... arrggG!!!
I wrote some story but not yet finish, and everytime i'm gonna continue them, i have no idea to finish them.
I never feel afraid if i leave them..............
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
5 Mar 08
I can never write a short story, I go on and on. But I find if I start in the am, I can write longer, but often then I do not have the time, and so I write for 30 to 40 minutes at a time. You could make a plot of what the story is about. That might help.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 Jul 08
I had to start my novel several times to get it right. I got this advice about starting it with the most exciting part, but then I thought if I did what comes next. Endings are a different matter. I usually can figure out what happens when the hero wins or whatever. It is the middles. What is most important and what moves the story along. I keep deleting more as I go along, and adding other stuff that I consider more important.
@Johnnypenn (237)
• United States
18 Jun 08
This is what we all need to remember when it comes to the ending...its the best part of the story. So, if the ending makes no sense and it stinks...re-write.
As for re-writes...I have alloted myself three. THe first was to clean it up so that I could actually read what I had. THe second is the re-writes of scenes, and the third is another clean up and hopefully the end.
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@Aingealicia (1905)
• United States
4 Mar 08
I have written one novel, I am now on my third rewrite, however the computer is unplugged that it is on. It is on my Mac, I do one chapter of a rewrite, however I always finish a chapter when I am working on a novel.
I never place time on it because the words will come as the y are supposed to.
Ainge
Just so you know I am working on 2 novels right now on my lap top and I have about 5 jobs.
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
17 May 08
I try to stay there and get as much done as possible
as I am afraid I will lose my momentum and the thoughts
that are tumbling in my head.but sometimes you just
have to quit and come back another time as your
body is rebelling with your mind. So then I just
give up and go on to bed. Then I tackle it the next day.
I will feel refreshed then and able to think more
clearly.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
17 May 08
It depends on whether you are writing the first draft, or doing the revision. I find when I start writing a novel, then I have to be at the computer as long as possible, but when I am doing the fourth, etc. drafts (I am on the sixth,) that I can write for half an hour and come back later. I also find when I have only a short period of time, that I can also fix up the mistakes. I sure found a lot of them this time around, like "How in the heck did he get in the room without knowing whether he climbed through the window, went through the door, or materialized ala Star Trek?"
@beccasthoughts (303)
• United States
16 Jul 08
For me, when I get tired, I stand and move around a few. Then I look for a drink with caffeine in it. When I return to my computer, I continue to write until I have at least finished the chapter, and then I will call it a night. I find it better to make it to that point and then continue the next day.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 Jul 08
That sounds like a good idea. I like to get up and walk around, but knowing me, I will probably find something else to do, so I will write until I get at least a scene on and then get a drink of green tea or coffee so that I can say that at least I am getting on ahead. That makes it much easier for me. We were on a trip and before I went, I decided to do a whole lot of writing and now it looks I am almost finished this draft. I find it better to write in the day though. At night I want to go to sleep unless it is early in the evening.
@lordwarwizard (35747)
• Singapore
1 Mar 08
Wow! Commendable of you to be writing a book.
I have always wanted to start... in fact I have started. I had a trilogy planned and was typing the first chapter for a few days then I sort of abandoned the whole project. :(
Why do you start falling asleep after 30 min? Are you just tired? Or does this happen whatever you are doing? Because otherwise, if you are really INTO writing, the more you write, the more you don't feel like stopping.
If it is just one of those down days, give yourself a break. Come back another time refreshed.;)
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
6 Mar 08
I get so interested in writing, and I concentrate so deeply that I can only last about thirty minutes before getting dozy. I find I am more awake in the early morning, but then my brain is not working as well, so when I read it later on in the day or the next, I say to myself "what stupidity was I writing?" Non-writers have a wrong idea about writing. They think we can go on for hours without stopping, but we are also thinking, and seeing if that sentence looks right, if it is too simple, can the reader understand it, and going back to another chapter, or another paragraph because the character cannot get off a horse if they did not get on the horse in the first place.
@terilee79720 (3621)
• United States
3 Mar 08
Hi suspenseful.
If I realize sitting at the computer is going to be difficult, for whatever reason, but I'm in the 'novel mood', I get out my old walkman recorder and strap it to me. Since I'm in the position to do so, whatever I'm doing, I carry my walkman with me and just start chattering. With the recorder button on, I rattle on...speaking the novel.
Sometimes, depending on the situation, the words come out quicker, as rapidly as the thought process, and I don't loose the train of thought. As I speak, the thought process or memory continues to process, going into the recorder faster than my fingers would be able to keep up if I were typing on the computer.
Then, again depending on the mood, I can transcribe what I spoke, making sure I get through the complete thought process.
When I'm sitting at the computer, if I find me nodding off, or going into that glassy eyed state, I make sure I leave the thought process at a point where I can just pick it back up again.
I never worry about 'getting back to it'. It's always there...waiting to be let out.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I use my voice digital recorder to practice my singing. I never thought about it to talk my novel, but since my husband is in the same room with me and he is listening to "Harry Potter" again, he might think I am going out of my mind. And if I start to go for a walk outside, all the guys and ladies walking their dogs will think I am going bananas if i am walking and talking and it is not into my cellphone. So I might write the idea in my journal and find I cannot read them, or I keep it in my head and write it in the novel. I do have a folder of novel ideas just in case I have enough time to write all of those other novels.
@KATRINKA (1624)
• United States
3 Mar 08
The first thing I ask is are you setting unrealistic goals? Maybe that 45 minutes needed to be broken up. If you're going glassy eyed and your head is nodding off, maybe you need to do shorter sittings. Another thing. You said "you need at least that amount of time to get it right." Do you rewrite as you go along, or wait until the perfect sentence comes out of your head before you type it? Maybe you're putting too much pressure on yourself. Maybe instead of making yourself get each sentence down right, just write the story and then go back and rewrite.
As for me, I use pen and paper, even if I'm doing a rewrite. I'll type the draft, print it out, then rewrite by hand whatever needs polishing. Maybe it sounds like the long way around, but I've tried typing everything but it interferes with my creative flow. The other day I just didn't feel like writing. I was stressing over other things that should be done like vacuuming and laundry, and I was feeling yucky. Fighting a cold or something. I told myself that I had to apply my butt to a chair and write for at least an hour. If by that hour I was still feeling yucky and I couldn't get anything down, then I could give myself permission to stop. Usually what happens is that once I start writing, I get into a nice flow, and then I have the opposite problem. I have trouble stopping. I also stop my writing session in the middle of a scene. That way when I start writing again, I'm not so blocked. Usually, by the time I return to the scene, I've worked it out in my head so many times that it's nothing to write it.
I wish you the best, and I hope you will keep me posted with your writing.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
3 May 08
Bad wrists. Cannot write that long by hand, so I have to use the computer. I do write in my journal, but it is no good if after a time, You cannot read your own writing. I am doing my sixth draft, so I write from the fifth draft not exact copying but Iwill change the sentences or the paragraphs and add information or corrections then. Then the next time, I will go over the sixth draft again and correct it. If I cannot do it all in one setting, then I will do it again. There is one section that I took two or three days because first I wanted to add some information and then I looked and the characters did not sound right, so I had to change it again. So when I go back to it, I hope this time, I will just have to improve the way the sentences go and not the characters.
@dani27 (544)
• United States
3 Mar 08
I think that it is important to write often Maybe every day or every other day. but you don't always know what you are going to say. But if you make yourself sit there than at least something might pop into your head. WHen I do try to write it is about an hour.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
16 May 08
I find it hard to write when my husband is listening to the audio on his computer. It messes me up. I find it better to write in the morning as far as length goes, but my brain does not come into work until the afternoon and then is so nice, I feel like going for a walk. I cannot sit for a whole hour. I am more of a mover and shaker than a sitting stiller.
@ganga472007 (624)
• India
1 Mar 08
Before I learn computer, I used to write stories in a paper. I made a lot of correction and modifications. so there ware a lot of scoring, insertion and overwriting. After finishing it, I use to copy it in another paper. While copying, new ideas will crop up and again, same process continues. After acquiring knowledge in computer operation,I got a lot of relief which saves my time. So I am now in a position to sit more than half an hour in the computer without tiredness. I will finish short stories at a strech. I have not tried novels. I hope I can save time in drafting the novel in computer comparing with hand written.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
4 Mar 08
It is easier to draft on the computer. Saves quite a bit on paper that way. I can write for thirty minutes or a little more, but today I was able to work for forty minutes on the computer, well because I am going out later this morning and want to get my novel work done early. So I was able to do most of it in one sitting that is good for me.
@coffeebreak (17798)
• United States
1 Mar 08
I have the opposite problem! I could sit for hours and type...just can't think of what to type about or write about!
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