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Hello!I am a new member.I join in this community,the most important reason is for improving my English level by this chance.Besides certainly for the spending money.But I haven't got to see that if my expression right,or how to express more better.As the mistakes had been seen by anyone ,please tell me at once.I'm so glad to make friends with you and communicate with each other.Thanks very much! I like the children's literature,as if the news and events about the kids,I also want to know.