Abusive poem.. please read.
By ryan8kristin
@ryan8kristin (37)
United States
March 9, 2008 8:49pm CST
ok i have been thinking about my ex realtionship and i thought i would right a poem about abuse. please read and tell me what you think. thank you.
To whom i used to love but now forrgotten.
from the depths of despair whe my world fell apart i felt all alone and heavy in heart my life has been shattered by a tight fisted hand.who could i turn to. who would understand. so with no self esteem and a broken mess i made a decision about my happyness i took all my courage i could find to make a stand for myself and leave him behind those first few months were the most loneiest iv been but i knew it was worth it to bot be hit again. Again in finding myself i cried a river of tears learning to love me and facing my fears.
2 responses
@jeanniesam (27)
• United States
16 Mar 08
Coming out of an abusive marriage not too long ago, i think you have been very courageous to put these feelings into writing...literally for the world to see. But i am so proud of you for standing up and taking the initiative to getting away from the abuse. There are so many people out there that do understand what you have been through...more than you know. You have faced a great fear and will triumph! You may get lonely, you may cry many tears, but you will love with a true love. And when you do, you will never have to worry about this fear ever again!
@Samantha4684 (5)
• United States
10 Mar 08
Wonderful poem
truely through the eyes of someone put through a tough time
i know how it feels and i wrote a poem about it as well but that was a long time ago and i have tried my hardest to put it behind me but i know it can be hard
