Looking for a little feedback, please

United States
March 17, 2008 10:37am CST
Hello everyone. I have made a lens on Squidoo and am looking for some feedback, good or bad. I would really like some honest opinions on this. My lens is all about making money online. I know, big surprise, right? Well, I am just starting it up and wanted to get some opinions before I got too far into it. It's easier to change things when you have 10 things to change, instead of 100. If I could impose, please go to: http://www.squidoo.com/dmm1932 Please reply on squidoo or mylot and tell me what you think. Really, if you think I'm a doofus for doing this, please tell me. Thanks in advance for your help in this. Sorry guys, I could not figure out how to do the hyperlink. I think I need computers for Dummies or something. I guess you'll have to copy and paste. If anyone knows how, please let me know.
2 responses
Ruth Belena
@paid2write (5201)
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17 Mar 08
The hyperlink worked find for me. Your squidoo lens looks quite clear too. I think a good intro is essential and you invite people to keep coming back to look as you will add new information to the page, so I think that is good. You have also made good use of headings for each promotion. I have recently started making lenses at Squidoo but am still not certain how they work. They do need to be promoted to get enough views to make them pay.
dmm1932
@dmm1932 (46)
• United States
17 Mar 08
Thanks. That means a lot to me. I am still new with Squidoo also. I feel like I have a lot to share with people, but am not sure where to go. I kind of found Squidoo by accident. Are you on MySpace, also? I read a lot about it, and lots of people seem to have myspace pages. I am just curious if it's a good idea. You hear so many negative things on the news about it.
Ruth Belena
@paid2write (5201)
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17 Mar 08
No I'm not on myspace. I'd rather stick with MyLot.
citrusemma
@citrusemma (508)
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17 Mar 08
It looks quite good so far... maybe add some images and interactive things? There are plenty of options. Also, some more solid content is useful. When you are making a page, step back and read through it. Would you spend 20 minutes of your time reading that when there are so many similar pages on the internet? Is it eye-catching? Well-presented? Would you choose it over other sites? Hope I helped! - Emma xx
dmm1932
@dmm1932 (46)
• United States
18 Mar 08
Thanks for your help. This is still a work in progress. I have been putting a lot of time into it, and other people's opinions really help. I will definitely try adding some pics and more details. Thanks a bunch.