Smoke And Mirrors
@cynicalandoutspoken (4725)
United States
March 19, 2008 9:46pm CST
You see my smile because it is what I want you to see.
You will never truly know the person that is me.
You don't see the tears that I've so often cried.
You'll never know how much of my soul has whithered and died.
I am an illusion. A trick. This life I live is a lie.
Every day that passes is simply just another day gone by.
Nothing more than smoke and mirrors, and a magicians slight of hand.
I have blinded you so easily. Oh, isn't ignorance grand!
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3 responses
@skinnychick (6905)
• United States
20 Mar 08
Brutal but oh so fabulous!! I love it- thanks for sharing it!
@skinnychick (6905)
• United States
21 Mar 08
He rightly deserves it too. When I saw the post I was wondering what the he11 you were thinking! LOL!
Nice response dogg! :)
@skinnychick (6905)
• United States
22 Mar 08
I don't have that many..:) I would love if you did! :)
@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
20 Mar 08
Well written! How many people can relate to this I wonder, with the masks we wear in our everyday lives?
That's part of my current goal, though, to destroy those masks I wear and show the world more of my true self. That's why my motto is "I am the same person in all worlds".
@cynicalandoutspoken (4725)
• United States
20 Mar 08
That was my motto. As my friends offline that have taken up space here on the lot can attest. I am as me here as I am everywhere else. But it has just recently been brought to my attention that the me that I am still isn't the me that I am. I know that didn't confuse you. You are too smart to let some little double talk like that get the better of you.
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@lecanis (16647)
• Murfreesboro, Tennessee
20 Mar 08
The me that I am still isn't the real me either, but I'm trying to change that. I don't think you've confused me, at least.
Identity is a major topic for me, because at different points in my life I even went by different names based on the way I was viewing myself at the time. I have a lot of "me's" in a way, and trying to create a coherent whole from them is something that is going to be my quest for a long time, I think.
@CoupleinLove (31)
• United States
20 Mar 08
so what ur sayin is yer a fake. you knowingly trick people into believin yer sumthing or someone you aint.
ive never been good at this poetry crap but that is just what i got from it.