"A Tornado Dream"
By zenmachado
@zenmachado (1617)
United States
March 28, 2008 9:25am CST
"A Tornado Dream"
I’m hoping for a tornado that will come
and blow me to another scene.
Somewhere much more different,
like it happened to Dorothy.
Hopefully I will land in a better place,
somewhere that is full of glee.
Like Charlie becoming king of that candy factory.
I’m hoping for a dream,
that will gracefully take me away.
Some where very full of peace,
where my hairs can turn gray.
A home I would call “Fulfillment”
that is where I could stay.
A standing ovation when my life ends,
a clamoring audience at the end of a play.
ZeN
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5 responses
@wickedangel (1636)
• Dominican Republic
28 Mar 08
Hi there ZeN, you don't need a tornado for this. You can achieve this wherever you are ... you just need to be at peace with yourself and your surroundings and with those around you. I know it is not always easy but I think that that is life and that we must make the most of what we have.... Be happy and go in peace! 
@zenmachado (1617)
• United States
28 Mar 08
Thank you for the advise, outside concepts are always good to build up ones perspective.
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@ally42881 (73)
• United States
31 Mar 08
i was reading through your poems and i would have to say that they are really good and i enjoy them...
@olivemai (4738)
• United States
31 Mar 08
We are already in California, the land of good and plenty! All we need to do is find the right town for us! I know what you mean. All my life I dreamed of a place like California, and this seems to be the right place! Not too cold or too hot, not too much rain, not too far from the snow, or the ocean, just perfect!
@Breath (1297)
• United States
28 Mar 08
Very beautiful to set free the artist of the soul.A dream like poem.
