Let's tell a story together... take your turn ... let's see how long it can go..
By whiteheron
@whiteheron (4222)
United States
April 19, 2008 7:32pm CST
Hey all of you writers, this is your opportunity to write a story ...
Write and make yourr words carry the story forward as you will.
Let's see how long we can keep it going.
Please add to this from the last post to preserve the flow of the story and to make it more enjoyable for those who will read it later.
Writers start your writing engines, get on your writing cap, and have fun adding to this story.
Jesse, age 12, was visiting his grandmother with his parents and wanted to escape all of the adult conversation so he let himself out the front door of his grandmother's house and made his way across the streat where he had previously seen a gate that seemed to lead to a walkway. He hoped that i would take him to the beach. He opened the gate and found...
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@princesslee (158)
• Australia
20 Apr 08
a long path, leading into dark woods. Gingerly, he continued, trying to ignore the weird sounds surrounding him. The deeper he walked into the woods, the darker it got, and then, out of nowhere....
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@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
20 Apr 08
a bird flew and made a loud squawk. He jumped and then noticed...
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@princesslee (158)
• Australia
20 Apr 08
something hanging from the bird's neck. Jesse moved closer, the bird unflinching. Reaching out, Jesse took what looked like a talisman of some sort from the bird, a crystal star inside a circle. Holding it up the light shone through the crystal, then...
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@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
21 Apr 08
smiled as he saw a pattern form of multi-colored rainbows with a core of radient light.
He held the crystal high and was surprised to have the bird come and sit on his shoulder as he walked forward and saw a...
@shymurl (2765)
• United States
20 Apr 08
and found a pathway leading into some woods. The trees were as tall as skyscrapers. The ground below the trees were made of beautiful flowers and green green grass. He contemplated on entering. His mind wondered about the things lurking within the woods. He looked back at his grandmothers house, looked back at the woods and......
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@sunshinelady (7609)
• United States
21 Apr 08
saw a beautiful lady dressed all in white carring the yellow light. Her smile was so soft and she motioned for him to follow her. He hesitated not at all so entranced with this lovely lady he was. He never could seem to quite catch up to her. Just when he thought that he had she would be farther away. As he turned to look back at the house he found he could not see it. But the lady had stopped and looked at him and gently took her arm and moved over to him. She patted ever so gently with her hand his shoulder and motioned with her head to follow. He was mesmerized and did as she wanted. When he had followed her a good distance there appeared a hole in the trees and what he saw amazed him. He was looking at
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@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
21 Apr 08
a shimmering field of wildflowers and green grasses, bushes, and then a stand of beautiful pine trees, a stream, a lake and a castle that looked like it was made from the finest crystal as it shone so brightly.
His new friend gestured him to continue walking forward. He did so and wondered...
@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
20 Apr 08
saw a shimmering beam of yellow light moving through the trees. He paused to look at it in wonderment and then...
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