Let us write a story together about Amanda, age 9
By whiteheron
@whiteheron (4222)
United States
April 19, 2008 10:22pm CST
Here is another story to create together...
Please add your own words to it to move the story along.
Let's make sure that we respond to the last post made rather than going back to the original posts all of the time as we want this story to flow for the sake of the readers who will come to see it.
Continue the story...
9-year-old Amanda put on her play clothes and went outside holding a...
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@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
20 Apr 08
She went out to the backyard garden with her water pistol and package of wildflower seeds and started putting seeds into the small holes that she had already dug with popsicle stick. She hoped...
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@sunshinelady (7609)
• United States
21 Apr 08
the sun would shine on her seeds and the rain would water it. Every day she would come and look down at it and hoped for the beautiful flowers to show their heads. Then one day she ran over to it and threw her hands up on her mouth with a loud ohhhhhhhh. When she looked down she saw
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@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
21 Apr 08
tiny sprigs of shoots and green leaves popping up out of the soil. She smiled and immediately ran into the house to get her mother so she too could come and see.
When she went into the house to get her mother, her mother said...
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@ayush2008 (58)
• India
7 May 08
dall and her bicycle......she put her baby doll in front in the bucket..and start cycling..when she reached her friend linda house she park her bicycle and press the door bell.......
@whiteheron (4222)
• United States
7 May 08
Linda's mother answered the door and said, "what's wrong?" Amanda said," I need to talk with Linda." Linda's mother said, "She's in the bedroom." Amanda took her baby doll out of the bike's bucket, grabbed the baby doll's bottle that the doll was holding in her right hand and grabbed the blanket that was wrapped around her doll and walked into the house, headed for Linda's room, knocked on the door, said, "It's Amanda, can I come in?"
Linda said," Sure come on in..." She took one look at Amanda and saw her tears and asked "What's wrong?"
Amanda, with tears streaming down her cheeks, looked at Linda and said,
