poem: my own words. ......... what do youn think?
By goergineo
@goergineo (1498)
Jordan
April 27, 2008 7:05am CST
I gave a name to my new poem, it is called "go ahead"
go ahead, keep going
go ahead, keep posting
when the sun shines over you
that means 500 posts are now with you
life is super amazing
when you have a good rating
I do not know how silly can this gets
at least I gave shily what she wants
mark me as a best response
so, I can stand and my toes
go ahead, keep going
go ahead, keep posting
what do you think mylotters ?????????????
AM i GOOD ?
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3 responses
@kilani123 (864)
• United Arab Emirates
30 Apr 08
that really a nice poem you have here. keep writing man. I will be waiting for the next one.
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@goergineo (1498)
• Jordan
1 May 08
I really think of writing a new one. once I have it i will be waiting for your opinion.
@kilani123 (864)
• United Arab Emirates
8 Jun 08
good threads brother
and thanks for the best response