I tend to write long sentences, so I can say in one sentence what some
By suspenseful
@suspenseful (40193)
Canada
May 1, 2008 11:51am CST
can say in two or four. I heard that it is best to write four or more sentences on myLot, as well as the usual make the discussion intelligent, etc, no junk stuff, etc. So what happens when you write two sentences but because they are long, you get as much as someone who wrote four sentences. Does myLot pay by the sentence, or does it go by the length of the line? Or does it matter?
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
1 May 08
I find when I write short sentences, I have to combine them. I am not into the help all mankind bit. I figure that one can make oneself clear by long sentences just as much as short sentences. Besides Dickens and Jane Austin wrote in long sentences, but now it seems we have to write short and concise sentences because some reader cannot understand it. And our writing has suffered because of that.
@dartman2 (124)
• Canada
1 May 08
After reading all of these comments, and rereading mine, I see that I did not answer your question (I didn't know the answer). Indeed by offering some reminders about writing that I remembered from school many years ago, I have opened up a "can of worms". Please accept my apologies, Suspenseful. Writing should be for idea communication. No matter how we achieve it, it is all very worthwhile. I was trying in my clumsy way to be helpful.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
2 May 08
Thanks for trying. It is just that people have an assumption that if one writes short sentences, one is being concise and too the point. Yet when one writes long sentences, one is adding more words than necessary, and in effect, rambling. However, many long sentences are in reality combination sentences and are used instead of short sentences the writer feels are childish. I call it flowing. I want my writing to flow. An analogy is if one is driving a car, one can turn off the motor and start it up again everytime one reaches a red light. Or one can just stop the car, and wait through the red light and go again.
@paid2write (5201)
•
1 May 08
I write long sentences when I am writing and thinking at the same time. I think my words and they instantly appear on the screen, because I am a touch typist and I don't need to look at the keyboard. I always edit my words into short sentences, and add any other punctuation, before I post.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
1 May 08
I am always revising, only with me it is the opposite. I find that the short sentences are too jerky so I combine them into longer ones if they express the same general thought.
@reinydawn (11643)
• United States
2 May 08
Someone once said it was the number of commas. I have no clue if that is correct. I do know that some people don't use sentences at all and just mash it all together into one long sentence. That's annoying because you can't understand it. But if the sentence still makes sense I'll make a long too!
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@reinydawn (11643)
• United States
21 May 08
That is so true. I have had that happen to me also.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
23 Jun 08
I used to belong to a critique group, but have not been on it recently because there were only a few real authors - I mean the kinds that you can get their books on Amazon or the kind that are almost there. There was this girl who was into poetry and boasting, and she said that my sentences were too long. Yet none of the others said, only she did. So what I did was to copy a couple of sentences from each of my favorite authors, Dickens, and some of the modern Science Fiction authors like Clarke, and do you know, they would have gotten into trouble with her as well.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
The secret is that if the thoughts or the ideas link together, then it can work as long sentence. But if something new happens, you need another sentence. I find long sentences easier for me, but I do find that my idea of long sentences is a lot different than Microsoft Word. And I read some of my favorite author's sentences as well and they will be in trouble with Microsoft Word.
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@mipen2006 (5528)
• Australia
5 May 08
Being an ESL teacher for the past ten years has probably affected my sentence structure somewhat. When we teaching students to write we always stress KISS - Keep It Short & Simple. otherwise they try to put all their ideas into one sentence. I always tell them to brainstorm their ideas, but in reality most don't, so the resultant sentences are very hard to understand. I guess years of teaching this has rubbed off on my writing.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I suppose writing sentences as short as five words is all right if you are just learning to do English, but as they get more proficient then they could stretch it to fifteen to twenty words. I gather that is not the length of the sentence that is the problem but the use of commas, semi colons, and colons and getting the idea or the connecting thoughts in one sentence. So they are not used to the English grammatical forms and divisions of sentences yet. It also depends on what you consider short and long. When I think short, I think about five words. When I think long it is about fifteen or more, depending on whether three are commas and or semi colons.
@abroji (3247)
• India
2 May 08
As far as myLot is concerned our sentences could be either long or short. What matters is the quality of content.
But then if you ask about writing in general, I would say it is better to use simple and short sentences. It will make your writing more clear and easy to follow. Usually long sentences are unavoidable when you draft some legal or statutory matters.
In the English translation of 'Autumn of the Patriarch'- the famous novel from the celebrated Spanish (Latin American) author Gabriel Garcia Marquez - I have seen some sentences stretching to more than a dozen pages. It was too difficult to follow and understand. But a passage consisting of short sentences will be more pleasing to read. However an author with gifted craftsmanship can easily write in long sentences and convey his/her ideas easily.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
2 May 08
My sentences are not four pages long. I do tend to write about ten to fifteen words in a sentence, and I feel the idea that long sentences are bad, even though they are better able to get a point across, is because people have now shorter attention spans because of watching fifteen minute tv and two minute commercials. So rather than get writers to accommodate them, we should get people to increase their attention spans. After all, in the old days, no one had an trouble reading long sentences then. Have people become lazier and stupider now?
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
23 Jun 08
I do not think that 22 words is that long of a sentence and apparently when I had my novel critiqued, there was this one girl who wanted me to make my sentences eleven words long. I mean there is a lot of difference between one hundred words or two hundred words in a sentence and twenty=two or twenty-five or even thirty. I mean is the day going to come when any sentence over ten words is considered too complicated, and we do not need to learn that college vocabulary because no one can understand those words?
That is what will eventually happen when we decide that now people are not as smart as those even fifty to one hundred years ago. The standards go down even further.
@abroji (3247)
• India
6 May 08
I appreciate your views and agree to the point that in olden days people did not find any difficulty in reading and understanding long sentences, but as times have changed so are our reading and writing habits, which I think are quite natural and irrevocable.
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@meiji15 (664)
• Philippines
1 May 08
you know up until now i have no idea how mylot determines the amount that you'll be paid. but i would like to think that they pay you weighing the quality of the response and not in the number of sentences. sometimes, i can cram a couple of ideas in one sentence, even three ideas. i usually use commas, hyphens (---) and semi colons to pull off having all sorts of ideas in one sentence.
trivia: do you know that the preamble of the philippine constitution (1987) is only one sentence. talk about a lengthy sentence.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
1 May 08
I did not know that. It is rather interesting. I suppose it is easy to understand as well.
@Polly1 (12645)
• United States
1 May 08
As far as I know mylot pays by participation. I tend to write long sentences too. I don't think mylot pays attention if we use a period in between sentences. They don't want a bunch of one or two word responses. I think you do fine with your responses.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
It does get confusing because with four short sentences you cannot full four lines. I used to do exercises like that, write a sentence to fill a line, and I thought well with these rules such as four lines or four sentences, quality, etc. was making myLot a little less fun and then there was the, "the foreign people cannot understand you unless you write in short sentence"bit and I thought it just as easy to separate those four sentences with commas and make one long one and it worked.
@lovespecialangel (3632)
• United States
2 May 08
I'm not really sure on this one, but I don't think they do. However, it's good practice to write your sentences are properly as possible. I am taking online college courses and I try to improve my writing skills as I post in mylot. It actually helps some.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I do find it easy to write long sentences, and they are usually two or three thoughts that are similar. I will only write another sentence when I cannot express the thought or the idea in the one before. It is sort of like a train, where every car can hold so many, and they are hooked up to each other.
Oh did you get the idea that Numb3rs is one of my favorite shows?
@GardenGerty (160626)
• United States
3 May 08
They do not pay by the word, the sentence or the line. The suggestion of at least four sentences has more to do with making sure you are actually contributing something to the discussion, and not just saying "Yes,I like Pepsi, too." Or "I agree with you." I am sure you add new ideas to the discussions you answer, and that is the important part. I look to try to have at least four lines in my browser before I post. I like it even better if I can thing of something that takes at least ten lines. At that point I will make better income. Hope I am not making things more confusing.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
3 May 08
It is not that confusing. I wish that I could write ten lines, but it seems I am more concise then I think I am. I can give the whole idea in one sentences and I have to use the other sentences to fill them in. If I can do four lines, I am lucky unless it is that controversial subject. Then I can go on and on. So I guess they pay for how many people answers your posts. Then I had better get at it.
@winterose (39887)
• Canada
1 May 08
I think it is per line or per word count, in which it would be the same thing for your two long sentences as somebody's four shorter sentences. I don't worry about little things like that anyway, I just write what I have to write and then what I get paid, I get paid.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
1 May 08
I tend to be concise and not rant as much. I also do not start that many posts. I did not do any yesterday because I wanted to get rid of my unresolved discussions. They were driving me crazy. So now I will get back to posting.
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@anniepa (27955)
• United States
3 May 08
I don't think they pay just by sentence or by line but in general a post of more than line - whether it be one long sentence or several shorter ones - probably pays more than a one-line or, even worse, a one or two word post. Hey, look at that! I put that all into one sentence without consciously trying to! What do you suppose that will be worth...lol?
Annie
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
23 Jun 08
I suppose that would be worth more than a two word sentence. I also think that if you write another long sentence, it will pay even more. If I get passionate about a subject, and also add several links then it just goes on and on, and I find that I cannot even full the little box without using the up or down arrow on my mouse. However, that seldom happens.
@joyceshookery (2057)
• United States
1 May 08
When I offered some of my writing to be critiqued, I was told to make shorter sentences. This sentence is a bit long, but I didn't know how to shorten it.
I've been observing the writers of books I read. Their sentences are fairly short. I suppose short sentences are easier to digest.
Mylot doesn't pay by the sentence. It pays by the post. I've heard that short posts of less than 3-4 lines aren't paid.
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@bongkarpasang (1377)
• Indonesia
4 May 08
I don’t really focus on how long my sentence would become in each of my posts. Usually I just voice out my words in mind and then that’s how the responses I made have been coming out.
I keep hearing that myLot pays according how long the lines we make for that post, but I’m not sure. A certain friend said that a person she knew tried to make at least 6 till 8 lines for a certain post, but found out that it didn’t really work. But I don’t know what kind of post that person had made. So I think I shouldn’t focus too much onto the length. At least the discussion owner gets my point and I get good rate, that’s enough for me. :)
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I find it easy to write long sentences and difficult to make them shorter. Perhaps that is because I can express my thought easier when I divide my sentences by commas and semi-colons rather than make them short and not so sweet. I tried the write six or more lines, but I found that it did not work unless it was a subject that I was passionate about. If you express your point in four lines, the others are just repetitions in another form or the other.
@musicdoG (227)
• United States
2 May 08
I've no idea how the earnings go about because mine hasn't moved yet but as to whether which is preferred long sentences or short; I write what i think would be a proper and respectable response and doesn't matter if it's long or short; i have yet to see my earnings though after a few posts i did already, I'm beginning to wonder myself
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I never could understand how things worked. I had a hard time earning money at first, and I thought I would never get there. I thought sometimes I am doing all this writing and what is a quality decision? Do they want short easy sentences or long ones? Do they want the lines filled and what if someone doubled spaced every word and were not trying to show slowness? So all these questions went through my mind and still I am confused.
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I have no idea how they pay, but it would be more sensible the more words you write, the more pay you get. That could be the reason why they recommend you write in four lines or in four sentences. And someone who writes ten lines as long as they are quality discussion deserves to get paid more. But there are those who write ten lines or complaints and rants and I cannot make out what the discussion was about then.
@whittby (3072)
• United States
1 May 08
I've heard that it counts more by the line - say four or five lines worth of discussion. That being said, I had my computer resolution set to make the print larger for awhile. It looked like I had bigger - longer - discussions than I really did . I know they say they won't do it, but I would love to see their criteria for payment.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
I have no idea. I think they dance around a cauldron like in MacBeth and say, "all right what shall we pay the myLotters this month? Say you don't have an extra eye of newt with you? I lost mine!" I tried to figure out, and all I know is we get paid for every post we make or receive as long as it is quality discussions. The trouble is that it is a two way street, I write a post and I have to write it so you are able to answer it in more than three lines. That is why I was confused. Is it four lines or four sentences?
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@newzealtralian (3930)
• Australia
20 May 08
Everyone has different writing styles. What works for you works, or you would change it. Might not work for the next person, but they will have their own style.
I think mylot only pays per actual response, not the length of it.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
21 May 08
Well long sentences work for me. I do not know how myLot pays. If it just by response then we do not have to worry about the length of our sentence, but if it by the number of words, then we have to write more than two or three lines. If it is by quality, well I think I am in deep trouble. I hope it is not by those who do the most ranting.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
23 Jun 08
I tried writing shorter, but it does not seem to work, unless it is in a story with a lot of action. Then since I writing about fighting, and I have to make sure the guy knows that someone is about to clobber him. Whereas in articles and in myLot, I want to get the thought across and not be disjointed.
@newzealtralian (3930)
• Australia
23 Jun 08
I don't think you are in trouble. We all have our little quirks for writing, and that is what makes our writings even more special!
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@Sillychick (3275)
• United States
1 May 08
I don't think they pay by the sentence, or by the line. You could write a whole page and not say anything, or you could write two sentences and say a lot. What matters most is content. How meaningful are your posts? Are they relevant and coherent? Or are they nonsensical ramblings? Mylot pays for quality, not necessarily quantity.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
1 May 08
I make a lot of sense. I do not ramble and I do make sense. (how dare you accuse me of rambling nonsense!). When I write in short sentences, I will combine one or two of them because it is the same thought. I will give you an example: "I went for a walk. I went to McDonalds." So I would say, "I went for a walk to McDonalds."
@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
2 May 08
I find it natural to make longer sentences. When I write short sentence unless to answer a question without going into detail, I feel like I am writing to children. So for me to ex;plain everything in detail at one shot is much easier then doing the short sentence detail. Long sentences come naturally to me and I find it hard to go back to short, especially when I look at it and think, "I am an older woman, and now I write like an eight year old?"
@Sillychick (3275)
• United States
1 May 08
I Was Not accusing you of rambling nonsense. I simply said that length is not everything. There are people- not necessarily you- that think longer posts are automatically better than shorter ones, and just ramble on to make them longer. Sometimes it's better to make it short and sweet.
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@Hatley (163776)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Jul 08
suspenseful it is best to write five or six sentences
on responses and disucssions so my lot pays for quality
as opposed to quantity. I think mylot uses soft ware
to decide that and how mylot figures this out is mylot
business as they state very clearly do not ask how we do'
it as that is our secret. so just relax and dont worry
about it.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
27 Jul 08
I thought it referred to the lines we write, not the sentences, because four or five short sentences does not take that many lines. I am not worried now, because I must be doing something write. It is just that I find that some discussions I answer do not need more than a couple of sentences for a response, and they are not that long sentences either. With those, maybe I should put double space between the words.
@movicont (495)
• United States
26 Jul 08
I don't think myLot judges based on sentences. It's probably more important that your post has quality, so if you can explain yourself well in one sentence, that should be fine. After all, I've seen books where an entire paragraph is just one sentence, but that sentence really hits the point.
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@suspenseful (40193)
• Canada
27 Jul 08
I sometimes write a paragraph in one sentence, when one has to explain the whole idea and if you break up, it does not work. If I can get away with three sentences in a paragraph, I will do so, but I am getting to the point when I can write more then five sentences, but not at first. It is usually in rewrites.