A poem with no title
By anex08
@anex08 (868)
Philippines
May 2, 2008 4:15am CST
I was hypnotized by the pouring rain
it's drop lightly tapping my window pane
I was about to leave just like the same
When I realized I still have that hidden pain
I walked slowly towards the window
I can sense my feelings will start to mellow
one step closer and I was about to follow
What's the rain doing? My tears insisted to flow
I wiped off the liquid out of my face
don't allow it to linger for a minute
this is not the moment for any weakness
I have to stand firm whatever it takes
My life is a battle full of temptation
but you can't see regret from any of my action
true, I am soft with vulnerable emotion
but dont forget woman are made to be strong
This poem I made is untitled, even I do not know how to end it. Im out of words my God help!
here are some links to poetry that I love reading, if you have time you can take a look and read it:
http://www.authspot.com/poetry/how-could-it-be.112609
http://www.authspot.com/poetry/my-man-my-lover-my-friend.112053
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3 responses
@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
6 May 08
This is a wonderful poem. I really did enjoy reading it alot. Just take your time and I am sure the ending will come to you as easily as the beginning did. This is very good.
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@torradalouca (199)
• Brazil
14 May 08
Great poets needs great feelings. Everybody says the same thing with the same words. And you are not an exeption. Keep reading hard before post a poem with no end and no title. And try to see the things from another point. You are not the center of the universe.
Nice poem, by the way. As all that I did read here.
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@torradalouca (199)
• Brazil
15 May 08
Dont missunderstand me. When you show something to a comunity you must be read to hear good and bad coments about it, because its impossible to please everybody. I did like your poem, but I have read better ones. I thank you too for the advice that you just gave me, but I will aways think that opnions should be said.
@anex08 (868)
• Philippines
14 May 08
Hey! I am not saying that I am the center of the universe. I post a poem here for my friend to give comments or add some if they feel too, I am not asking someone to finish what I have started. As a writer, I would like to know how others strike with the one that was already opened. I think you should be the one to think first before you post. My advise is, if you don't have something good to say hold back your tongue and tame it, you might help give peace to earth.
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