Best Mom
By sunkissed
@sunkissed (4330)
United States
May 6, 2008 4:02pm CST
Well I am not a Poet, But I do write a few poems Every now and then.This is a poem that I wrote for my mother for Mothers day.
Best Mom
You have always been the best
A better mom than all the rest
Mom you are very differant from the others.
You have always been there when I needed you to comfort and care.
I know I am in yout thoughts both night and day.
Your love is always in my heart
Even though we are miles apart.
Thank you for always being there when I need you most.
For being my "ROCK",when I should have been yours.
Your love is unconditional.
Never once have you judged me or said I told you so.
I am proud to say you are my Mom.
You are the very best.
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4 responses
@gemini_rose (16264)
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6 May 08
I like it!! I am the same as you, not a poet, have not got the first clue about it, as long as they rhyme and I like them then to me it is a poem. I have written a few in the last few days, I go through stages where everything I think of seems to rhyme and so I write it down and then it goes and I get nothing for ages!! I like what you wrote though.
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@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
6 May 08
Thank You. I have wrote alot better, I started writing poems when I was in the hospital in 1998. but I am like you at times the words just come right too me, right now I am having a very hard time, too many things on my mind..
@gemini_rose (16264)
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8 May 08
Well I liked it, when I have a lot of things on my mind I just go blank, it is strange.
@torradalouca (199)
• Brazil
15 May 08
Yes, you are right too. What makes someone a poet? I dont know. Work hard, you got talent there =D
@sisterjinx (1135)
• United States
6 May 08
It seems to me that though we have a fairly large poetic community on here that poems often go without response or acknowledgment. I wanted to acknowledge you. I think this is a lovely poem and thank you for sharing it with us.
@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
6 May 08
Yes, You are right, poems do go unacknowledged here.People do not seem to read them much. I love poetry. Thank you so much for reading this poem, and for your lovely comment.
@busdriver99 (25)
• United States
14 May 08
I wish I could write poetry. This how I fill about my mother. She is there for me no matter what I do.
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@sunkissed (4330)
• United States
15 May 08
That is so very sweet,That makes your Mother feel so good.I am glad that your mother is always there for you.you must be a wonderful daughter!
