My Poetry
By LordBane
@LordBane (47)
Australia
November 1, 2006 11:15pm CST
I am a 25 year old Australian who has written hundreds of poems and I'd like to see what everyone thinks. I'll start off with an easy one.
"Sellout" written by David L. Riley 30/10/2006
"Oh no...
I was sold down the river again
Oh no...
I felt that rage again
The pain of apathy
This can't be happening to me
Forgive me for I have sinned again
Bathe me in light
As I fall from grace again
I am a fool
I am a fool
I've sold...I've sold...I've sold everything
I've sold...I've sold...I've sold everything
Give me back my soul
Please give me back my soul
And I'm not sure what I did
And I've got nothing left to give
I'm not the man I used to be
There's not much left of me now
I got to get it back somehow
For all you took from me, it's not as much as I sold freely
I gave you my soul
You TOOK my heart
Can't we start again, get back to the start?
No?
THOUGHT NOT! THOUGHT NOT! THOUGHT NOT!
You are the God that makes me whole
For you I'd sell my soul
You are the Goddess that makes me whole
To taste you I'd sell my SOUL!
MY SOUL! MY SOUL! MY SOUL! MY SOUL!
Oh no, you're here again
Press delete
Bow at your feet
You're gone again, YOU'RE GONE AGAIN! YOU'RE GONE AGAIN!
For you I'd sell everything
For you I'd sell everything
For you I'd sell everything
For you I'd sell every...thing..."
1 response
@dnatureofdtrain (5273)
• Janesville, Wisconsin
13 Dec 06
Wow, What a wonderful poem, I sure can related to alot of it. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading others you have to share. If you want to read mine just use a search engine and type DNatureofDTrain that should lead you to my page with my poems and writings, or search on MyLot search I have some of them tagged. Take Care,- DNatureofDTrain