SICK MARIA CLARA ('',) ~ just sharing another poem guys.. ^^

Philippines
May 30, 2008 12:26am CST
~ a poem i made when i was in hell form having this authentic madness about my mother. she wears that torturing eyes like an evil in disguise she walks like their's no tomorrow and leaves with a whizzing blow. sometimes when the sun breaks i don't know what again will it takes but just hearing that sparkling anger coming like a fist. fear is rolling over anger is taking like forever the bruise in my ears are gone it hurts that i became numb. she took the other way not knowing where's the truth she always had her bite watching her blazing sky corrupting her teaseled mind a coffee in my hand a filthy rubber band somethings going on i know theres something wrong. take me out of site i need to see the light am i be to be like this, forever? forever? -_-
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@bjcyrix (6901)
• Philippines
30 May 08
You know that is a really nice poem. Maybe not exactly the words that you might have described your poem because you were ranting about your mother but that poem is really nice. You should submit it to contests or something. If only I have the artistic talent as yours I would have made many many beautiful poems and thats about my mother alone. Im sure you have lots of other poems that you've made so why not make it into a business or turn a bit of a profit from it. That way, you get to vent your feelings in a healthy and artistic way and still be able to get something more out of it besides emotional relief. Hope that helps, goodluck!^_^
• Philippines
30 May 08
haha! yeah.. i myself didnt know what i wrote about how i described it. i wanted to, but im a silent person. i never got to show off my poems.. :) thanks though. im flattered that you liked it. ^^
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@bjcyrix (6901)
• Philippines
31 May 08
Nice, Im a silent person too. I like to keep to myself most of the time. Nice to meet you.^_^
• Philippines
31 May 08
nice to meet you too! :)
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• China
5 Jun 08
It's nonsense..I'm afraid
• Philippines
7 Jun 08
im afraid that you wont understand it if you have a very very good relationship with you mom. ^^ naahh.. thnx for the reply thou`., ;)