My Story Central
By ShawnTG
@ShawnTG (26)
Bahamas
3 responses
@re08dz (1941)
• Australia
14 Jun 08
Hi, I've only just started to read this (I'll bookmark it and come back to it later) but I wanted to offer a quick suggestion if you don't mind.
While setting it up on a blog is a great idea - because of the template etc that you're using the written text only covers a small area - when people are reading on a computer large chunks of text can be really hard on the eyes - so as well as putting a line break between paragraphs you might want to look at breaking it up a little more - say a line space between dialogue etc.
I'll try to read it properly later on today.
@anaknitatay (1335)
• Philippines
14 Jun 08
Hi, I also planned a blog similar to this one but never got around to it because I was so busy.
It's nice to see I'm not the only one with this idea. I'll be sure to check out your blog and contact you once I've started mine. 

@skydancer (2101)
• United States
13 Jun 08
That's a great idea to keep it in a blog to update periodically like that. And your writing seems very strong and descriptive too. Keep up the great work! You can only get better!
