A Poem I Wrote (Give me insight)

United States
June 21, 2008 3:08pm CST
Clink, Clank, Clack Go the blackpots hanging overhead Bang, Bang, Bang Go the childrenplaying withthe potsandpans Boistrous BobbyanHarold laughing loudly Carry, Ann, and Carly playing, andsinging hopscotch just forfun Children laughing, playingand havingfun Not wanting toever Growup Never caring about a thing Just always wanting to play and sing well do you think?
3 responses
vegbunny
@vegbunny (5)
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4 Jul 08
isn't free verse poetry? lol... It does a nice job of painting a picture
theirishimp
@theirishimp (126)
• United States
6 Nov 08
Yes Free verse is a way of writing poetry
RK Finnell
@irishidid (8687)
• United States
21 Jun 08
It isn't poetry, it's free verse. But, it is interesting.
dianagnes
@dianagnes (1088)
• Singapore
21 Jun 08
I understand what you mean.So,a poem that could be understand is consider as good.I like the way you match the words that sounds like a tongue twister..ahaks!