just for fun let's make a poem ....
By Liz
@dasiejanie (590)
United States
4 responses
@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
23 Jun 08
Well, i dont mind doin it again :P .. I'll go :) ..
Somewhere somehow,
Evereyone lets go.
No tears yet in these eyes.
Somehow, everyone seems to know.
Look at me, i dont even try.
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@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
23 Jun 08
-claps- bravo ... Hehe .. thats one i had wrote a long time back.. Mine's a bit more dark, but i loved what you did to it.
You are right, it indeed is fun ..
If you're willing, go again one more time ... i'll try and give it a shot .. or we can continue this one, or we can wait for some other day to do it :P ..
Up to you :) ..
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@dasiejanie (590)
• United States
23 Jun 08
she wiped away a tear that was streaming down her face
threw away her keys, she wouldn't need them at this place.
stepped through the door of what her life now would be,
had to tell herself her name was now julie.
good luck! lets see what u got...
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@dasiejanie (590)
• United States
23 Jun 08
Somewhere somehow, everyone lets go.
No tears yet in these eyes.
Somehow, everyone seems to know.
Look at me, I don't even try.
Somehow I'm sure as days turn into years,
To see you, I'll turn, eyes filled with tears.
Somewhere, someday I'll see you with your kids,
The pain of what if comes, their not mine but his.
this one was tough but.... fun :)
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@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
22 Jun 08
She stood in front of me
Her eyes as cold as ice
The empty vacant stare
The question is life fair
Where is this girl with golden hair.
I see her looking at me ..
But is she what she pretends to be
Who knows how in life we'll fare
Isnt it justt oo hard to see
And then, give it all up .. in desperate despair.
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@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
23 Jun 08
Thanks a lot :) ..
thanks for the BR as well,
and for the invite. lol ..
take care ;) ..
@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
8 Jul 08
Her laughter brought his eyes to her,
He could not look away..
Such inspired demonic power they held ..
They thoughts were there,
The words he could not say.
She saw him drown in self,
Saw him choke, smiled, to be fair.
Whispered unsaid promises for the next day ..
and left him alone in dire despair.
@Alucifer89 (292)
• India
8 Jul 08
How can someone be so perfect,
Almost evil, her perfection seems.
Almost holy, is this desire...
She is to be the breath i breathe..
The music i hear,
The air i respire.
Speculated, as he stood alone..
Entranced, by all that he had seen
