An endless poem..

Jamaica
July 10, 2008 2:30pm CST
The idea is to start a poem that will circulate as long as time permits- it is open to the creativity and expressiveness of well, everybody...write what you like and please keep it clean :-) I'm starting like this ...We met by the quiet conversation of our eyes they made four and blushes appeared Aware of her radiant beauty, I couldn't help but stare...
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• Canada
10 Jul 08
i needed to know if she liked me, gotta make my move fast, without any stopping, i gotta go ask....
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• Jamaica
11 Jul 08
Taking a leap into luv.. why not? great addition
@jasyjen (162)
• United States
10 Jul 08
Her big brown eyes consumed me I felt an ache inside my heart Although we hadn't spoken I knew this was just the start.....
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• Jamaica
11 Jul 08
very cool and creative
• United States
11 Jul 08
The hardest thing I ever had to do The moment we've been waiting for all of our lives Were you thinking of me like I have of you? She takes a step back and looks me straight in my eyes
• Jamaica
11 Jul 08
masterful use of words dude!
@NonaSaile (924)
• Philippines
11 Jul 08
and i get tongue tied. i speak out from my heart but it comes out only through my eyes thus it remains a quiet conversation
• Jamaica
11 Jul 08
jah kno bredda, you dun di poem :-)