one of my songs, im just putting it here coz i dont know where to put it, i use
By setroc
@setroc (853)
Philippines
July 15, 2008 2:54pm CST
write songs before, this one of the oldest and one of the few english songs ive written, since i dont know the language that well i write mostly in my native tongue, it is entitled old friend, here it is
i gave my heart away to know your joy and to know your pain
ive broken down my walls to welcome your morning light and your rain
you put your heart in my hands so i'd be gentle
so i would understand
old friend may my dawns begin with you
and my nights a cradle for two
let me breath you in
let me live you
let me know
i gave my life away
yet ive never been so free
and all the things that i see i see through you
i knew you
youve let me
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@meggan79 (436)
• United States
19 Aug 08
Thanks for the best response. I don't think any writing is crap, just some need to be revised a bit (some more than other)..and some are just what we need to write to reach the words that we are meant to find. Keep writing and you will be surprised at what will transform before your eyes.
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