Read the story I wrote and comment here please.

France
July 21, 2008 10:43am CST
I entered this story in a short story contest. It's titled "30 SECONDS". Please read the story, and please vote for it, if you like it. The link is http://dailywritingtips.com. It is the fifth story from the top. Comments and critiques are welcome.
1 response
@SusanLee (1920)
• United States
24 Jul 08
Once I get to the site, where do I go to find your story?