Conditional Love

@kassdaw (591)
United States
August 8, 2008 10:40pm CST
Conditional Love For what it's worth You said you'd love me For bettet, not worse The yelling with screams The nights heated The Love I felt No longer needed Pain and tears Consume my mind A marriage to hold me Our love to bind Love should be Unconditional and true But you've decided That your're through You scream and push I start to walk Apologies start I let you talk You blame me For the way you feel I see it now Your love wasn't real Conditional love For what it's worth You said you'd love me For better, not worse
2 responses
singout
@singout (980)
• United States
9 Aug 08
Wow! Great poem. Well done. I hope you didn't write it from experience, though. I want to read some more. Write something happier. Surely there have been some good times in your life to write about.
kassdaw
@kassdaw (591)
• United States
9 Aug 08
Thank you very much. Most of what I write is either sad or just dark and morbid. But I will being putting more of my poems on here. I really would like know what people think of the things I write. Keep an eye for more.
faln_angel1205
@faln_angel1205 (1192)
• United States
21 Aug 08
Absolutely a wonderful poem, very well written. I hope this is written from experience, as if it was...i am very sorry. However, i know that my best poetry comes from my real life experiences. Nice work, would love to read more from you.