Do you like this poem?
By nayiying
@nayiying (83)
August 13, 2008 2:10am CST
ten years notingness between life and death.
i want not think,but i forget not!
the solarity grave is thousands of mile away!
where can i tell my sorrow of my heart?
you would not recognize me if we meet.
my face dust coverd,my temple frost white.
last night,the dream brought me to our ord house.
where by the window,you were making up.
we gaze at each other's eyes no words,but only tears flowing in silence!
it must be some heart broken days,year afer year!
the bright moon night,the short pine hill!
--This is a chinese poem,do you like it?
6 responses
@nayiying (83)
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13 Aug 08
it is written by chinese ancient poet-- Su Shi,a great literary master.he lived in the period about nine hundred years ago.both Su Shi's father--Su Xin,and brother--Su Che were literary masters,too. three literary masters were born into the Su family,that made an interesting topic in Chinese literature. Su Shi come up many great masterpieces of Chinese literature.
@kisanchhantyal (420)
• Nepal
13 Aug 08
using the nature the poem speaking are good and rich enough and readable too . so I like it much. At first i thought that it was yours ? any way it is good and I suggest you start writing poem and stories.
@nayiying (83)
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13 Aug 08
it is written by chinese ancient poet--Su Shi,a great literary mater. he lived in the period that about nine hundred year ago.both Su Shi'father--Su Xun,and brother--Su Che were literary master,too. three literary masters were born into the Su family, that made an intereting topic in chinese literature.Su Shi come up many greap masterpieces of chinese literature.
i will have a try to write poems,thank you!
@adsaige (6)
• United States
15 Aug 08
I typically find this literary work to be very well written. I noted there are some words spelled wrong, and there are parts that could be edited to smooth out the hiccups that were there. When read out loud, it possesses some fine qualities that make the roof of my mouth vibrate, and brings to mind, plesant and bittersweet images.
Overall, the tone is very...lyrical.
I enjoyed it.
