Please Critique my Article

The discussion topic is must to all those loves pet animals. Personally I also suffered lot.I had a Doberman female.I paid my all attension to my dob since it reached its 1st Birthday. I treated her like one of my family member.But unfortunately I supposed to leave from my home town due to my Job.My parents not able to maintain, because they have crossed 60. They can’t move with its tough and aggressive behavior. So, they gave up.But it lives safely now. The thing here is, I suffered a week since I came to knew that my dob has taken by others. That scenario haunted me like anything. Still now I love her. Still I keep the photos with me. So make sure that when to get a pet and how to take care of it, what type of pet should get that we can keep with us longer. These all questions deal with your article. So, your topic is really addressable and discussable. And the things you mentioned in your article in fact necessary for whom planning to get a pet. Anything it may be. Your grateful service and moto buried your age. Keep continue discussion.