I just made a new lense

August 14, 2008 6:11pm CST
i was curious as to weather or not its worth constantly checking in on, i created it to advertise my webpage but you can earn income from the squidoo itself, is that worth exploring. my webpage is www.crunchypenguin.co.cc if you want to be nosey and my lense is http://www.squidoo.com/CrunchyPenguin Any input on how to improve my lense would be helpful, and my webpage has recently gone through some major changes so dont be too critical off it but feedback is received with a :D
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ArizonaSnow
@ArizonaSnow (105)
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15 Aug 08
OK - Here goes... You need to beef up your introduction and fill in all that white space, tell me more about your website and here is the biggie ... tell me why it is important that I visit your website. The guesbook - One of the main unspoken rules on squidoo is that you never leave a module in default mode - so personalise it. Your section entitled - Crunchy Penguins- 1 Big Blog - has extra links in it that look like they are from your blog ... so in your blog you want to turn these into active links. Hope this all helps - if you need to check out my credentials, visit my lensography at http://www.squidoo.com/arizona-snow
dave1205
@dave1205 (14)
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20 Aug 08
sry took so long to get back to your, but I think ive covered all the things you suggested if you want to pop back, even though currently im kinda trying too neglect the internet and finr a RL job, job hunting sucks :(
ArizonaSnow
@ArizonaSnow (105)
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20 Aug 08
I know what you mean - trying to earn cash on the internet can be a long slow and hard slog. BTW, I couldn't believe it when I read the about you, I know Huddersfield very well (I live there too).
thebeaddoodler
@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
15 Aug 08
One thing I'd definitely do is put a little more information in your bio.
dave1205
@dave1205 (14)
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15 Aug 08
thankyou, once ive joined the rest ofthis endless list of sites ind lens's and bookmarks things ill go back and improve it lol
thebeaddoodler
@thebeaddoodler (4262)
• Lubbock, Texas
15 Aug 08
Go back to Squidoo and join SquidU. Join the forum and ask for pointers or ask for a critique on your lens. They are very knowledgeable but they aren't harsh. They're champion Squidooers who know what makes a lens attract traffic and how to maximize your potential for earning. Asking friends here at myLot is understandable, but unless they're veteran squidooers, they can't possibly give you the insite that Squidu can. Happy squidooing! It's fun and its addicting even if you don't earn mega bux.